maxseveneight vs b.c.o.dcru

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maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
edited April 2011 in Lyrical Executions
maxseveneight vs b.c.o.dcru

16 lines
3 rounds
5 votes to win
50 post to vote
explain vote
due wednesday night
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited February 2011
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    checking in
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  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited February 2011
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    Im wit it...three rounds tho? Lol
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited February 2011
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    Vote on other battles and post your check in links. One a piece for each of you. These still need votes:

    ItzGravitaion vs thedesolateone: http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone%28Again-%29

    love yal vs deaththreats: http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101896-Love-Yal-vs-Deaththreats
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  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited February 2011
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    http://community.allhiphop.com/showthread.php?101857-ItzGravitaion-vs-Desolateone%28Again-%29

    there is my link.
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  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited February 2011
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    I'm in the mood to laugh...drop your verse!
    Your ambition or you rappin...idk what's worse!
    Smh @ max, dog! fetch a stlye for your rhymes
    and if you too lazy to do that...then stop wastein my mins.
    Take position, while I slump this ramblin Mel Gibson
    pump burrels that are ridged take off half his nurological functions
    then he'll claim "it's my shoulder, it's nothing" but he's fakein...he's buddens
    the remainder of his dome is like herpies, the mumps...nah it's more like results of one good lyrical punch
    you can tell he's outta touch...Afros? Alphabet soup?
    This dudes a paraplegic and LE is just something to do
    if not, well...You've been dropped out a B-52, super glued to a misile, and no parachute
    to the max you'll get pushed, and it's at your own fault
    for that 78 sugar hill cadence, and ? tough talk
    three rounds in a duel? Let's get real mu-phucka!
    Cause reality is...your thoughts are weak, built on an even weaker structure
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  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited February 2011
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    This round I use an axe
    what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade
    rip out what's behind his abs...only air
    deflate em'
    I'll take the seven or eight rating for being quite ill
    and spittin rounds at a nobody cause there's no comp here
    grab this ? by the hair, drag em' back to the lair
    club em' to death
    use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast
    max is a costipated metaphor a rusty tec
    and his brain matters composed of outdated tech
    a soulja boy duckin arrows and spears
    and when he hear congas get played youngin cowers in fear
    when he steps from behind the desktop he knows there's no more fake ?
    and right outside there's an acronym who runs wit the natives
    debate about details, but look at the facts...I'll let his ? swing
    he just got hit wit two slaps
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited February 2011
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    iller than most
    you get burnt like toast
    on the mic i boast
    cooking b.c.o.dcru like celebrity roast
    representing the 502
    down like dru
    my rhymes stay tight
    yours fall apart like missing screws
    you get booed
    dont act brand new
    your styles as wack as it ever was
    who does the mic so well
    hard to read by sight like braille
    wishing your brother george was here like del
    dismantling you cause your frail
    get back in your shell
    while i chase wack mcs you chase tail
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited February 2011
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    im down to slaughter
    rap marauder
    hide your daughters
    i keep it real
    while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler
    nasty like sewer water
    you got blood on your blade
    i regenerate
    verbal kung fu knock out your hearing aid
    like special ed i got it made
    crooked like cops from dade
    county
    you try and hound me
    yeah right your soulja
    more like soulja boy tell em
    your wack i can smell em
    hit you in your melon
    im the rap police your the felon
    bco
    you got a ? cat origin
    ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again
    lyrics keep pouring in
    the only 2 slaps are given to your ? and them
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited February 2011
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    78 the top bidder
    i get props worldwide
    you only get props on twitter
    short text
    i wreck
    threaten your manhood like bad sex
    you have no muscles so dont try and flex
    i come thru with the wild style
    b.c.o got the old style
    i got hundreds u got singles
    attack the track like bengal
    im rapping in person and online
    you only rap thru smoke signals
    you aint great
    complaining about 2 battles with the same due date
    for heavens sake
    step up and your soul i will take
    i break
    your dcru cut
    shut the f up
    drop ? like taking a dump
    have you begging enough is enough
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  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited February 2011
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    Feeding ain't my stlye but...let's pretend I'm a garbage truck
    eating three bags of your trash, your right...enough is enough

    *For the next two bars does a max impersonation*
    the presure ain't great
    I just couldn't wait
    max is dead weight
    so that ? you call mum, the only one with complaints bout due dates

    *rolls on the floor in laughter, and the impersonation continues*
    iller than who?
    Krista Tha Batista's like...eeewww!
    Back to the lab B-Rad
    most of Malibu's embarased, and want you to move

    so I'll let the room judge, cause fo real it's a wrap
    I think that was a great impersonation of an imitation rapper

    *the voice in my head says..."nah continue, play wit his name"*
    max father's a warm day...bet you think you hot, hu?
    The truth is...you just a 78 degree son
    a vagrant ? full of ?
    from the five hundred two 78 year ol' bums he let's ?
    I know that's sick, but what's disturbing is that not maxes maximum
    when I got blood on my blade, I was like...what's this ? ? ?
    ? is gutless, glad I ain't risk havin' ta ? a witness over an empty ?
    who I already slapped up, weaved her three swings, and jus knocked out wit one punch
    yeah I'm da crew cut...from the 38 that split ya shape up
    max shape up!

    *lemme get off this super forced punch*
    I'm cold...wit da bars, ? bar-burr! charge you a buck! Buck! Buck!
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  • deaththreats
    deaththreats Members Posts: 1,602 ✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    Pretty nice battle...

    ROUND 1:
    Punches: bcodcru (that sugarhill cadence punch was nice)
    Multi's: Tie (none really used)
    Metaphors: bcodcru (both rappers had some, but bco had more)
    Structure: Tie (both had easy to read structure)
    Overall Post: bcodcru (if you compare line for line, bco had the overall post)
    Vote: bcodcru
    Round 2:
    Max78 best lines:
    i keep it real
    while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler
    yeah right your soulja
    more like soulja boy tell em
    your wack i can smell em
    bco
    you got a ? cat origin
    ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again

    bco dcru best lines:
    This round I use an axe
    what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade
    rip out what's behind his abs...only air
    grab this ? by the hair, drag em' back to the lair
    club em' to death
    use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast

    Round 2:
    Punches: bcod cru
    Multi's: Max78
    Metaphors: Tie
    Structure: Tie
    Wordplay: Max78
    Overall Post: bcodcru
    Vote: Tie
    Round 3:
    Punches: bco dcru
    Multi's: Tie
    Metaphors: bco dcru
    Structure: Tie
    Wordplay: bcodcru
    Overall Post: bco dcru
    Vote: bco dcru
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited February 2011
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    Round 1
    b.c.o.dcru started off very weak but about halfway through, he came through and ended it okay. maxseveneight stayed pretty consistent. It was a real hard round to score. Have to score this one a tie which means 1 vote to each! Round 1 - tie

    Round 2
    b.c.o.dcru didn't come as hard as he did the first round. It was alright during the middle but the beginning and end was okay. I liked some of the personals. And maxseveneight didn't come nearly as hard. Had he spit as hard as he did in the first round, I would've given him my vote this round. Round 2 - b.c.o.dcru

    Round 3
    b.c.o.dcru didn't even follow the rules and went way over the line limit lol. It was pretty consistent but nothing special to me. I liked the personals but maxseveneight came hard in the middle of his verse with all those metaphors. Neither stuck out to me. I gotta give this one another tie. Vote - tie

    If I had to vote an overall winner, I'd say b.c.o.dcru barely.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    I'm in the mood to laugh...drop your verse!
    Your ambition or you rappin...idk what's worse!
    Okay intro...good punchline..
    Smh @ max, dog! fetch a stlye for your rhymes
    and if you too lazy to do that...then stop wastein my mins.
    Alright..
    Take position, while I slump this ramblin Mel Gibson
    pump burrels that are ridged take off half his nurological functions
    Nice line and vocab..
    then he'll claim "it's my shoulder, it's nothing" but he's fakein...he's buddens
    the remainder of his dome is like herpies, the mumps...nah it's more like results of one good lyrical punch
    Pretty good..bar
    you can tell he's outta touch...Afros? Alphabet soup?
    This dudes a paraplegic and LE is just something to do
    Good multies..and rhymes
    if not, well...You've been dropped out a B-52, super glued to a misile, and no parachute
    to the max you'll get pushed, and it's at your own fault
    Okay...drop you out a b-52 no parachute ...then is your own fault...crazy line
    for that 78 sugar hill cadence, and ? tough talk
    three rounds in a duel? Let's get real mu-phucka!
    Whoa...78 suger hill cadence..and ? tough talk..let's get real..wild line
    Cause reality is...your thoughts are weak, built on an even weaker structure
    Ooh..good ending

    Round 1 verse from bco dcru: 8.0
    Good verse, many creative lines
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    b.c.o.dcru wrote: »
    This round I use an axe
    what's that fragrence?...blood on my blade
    Crazy line...axe what the fragrence? Blood on the blade..dangerous opener
    rip out what's behind his abs...only air
    deflate em'
    Okay..only air deflate em...something different
    I'll take the seven or eight rating for being quite ill
    and spittin rounds at a nobody cause there's no comp here
    Okay Personal....seven or eight rating for being quite ill
    grab this ? by the hair, drag em' back to the lair
    club em' to death
    Deadly...line but good....grab by the hair drag em then club em to end
    use his mouth for an ashtray, rest my feet on his breast
    max is a costipated metaphor a rusty tec
    That line was pretty cool, but not cool...mouth as ashtray, rest his feet on his chest, he's like rust tec
    and his brain matters composed of outdated tech
    a soulja boy duckin arrows and spears
    Whoa...brain matters composed to outdated tech, ducking arrows and spears
    and when he hear congas get played youngin cowers in fear
    when he steps from behind the desktop he knows there's no more fake ?
    Slick line....good concepts...hear congas in fear, steps behinds desktop no fake..okay
    and right outside there's an acronym who runs wit the natives
    debate about details, but look at the facts...I'll let his ? swing
    he just got hit wit two slaps
    Not bad for ending...run wit natives gets two slaps

    B.c.o.dcru..8.3
    Creative verse...good lines..good concepts
    Round 2
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    maxseveneight wrote: »
    iller than most
    you get burnt like toast
    on the mic i boast
    Good opener..with good rhymes iller than most get burnt like toast, mic I boast
    cooking b.c.o.dcru like celebrity roast
    representing the 502
    Alright line...concept..cooking like celebrity roast representing the 502..okay
    down like dru
    my rhymes stay tight
    yours fall apart like missing screws
    Good line your rhymes stay tight fall apart like missing screws
    you get booed
    dont act brand new
    Not bad...okay get booed don't act brand new..
    your styles as wack as it ever was
    who does the mic so well
    Alright line and slick....styles as ever was...who does the mic so well.
    hard to read by sight like braille
    wishing your brother george was here like del
    Good rhymes...hard to read sight like del, wishing he was here like del..good line.
    dismantling you cause your frail
    get back in your shell
    Nice vocab...dismantling cause your frail...get back in your shell..good
    while i chase wack mcs you chase tail
    Good ending...keep up the good work..

    Maxseveneight: 8.0
    Lines were good...the rhymes were good as the concepts..good job
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    maxseveneight wrote: »
    im down to slaughter
    rap marauder
    Good opener with good wordplay
    hide your daughters
    i keep it real
    Okay line hide your daughter keep it real...something different
    while your fake wrestling like jerry lawler
    nasty like sewer water
    Not bad....rhyme good...good line..fake wrestler like Jerry Lawler, nasy like sewer water
    you got blood on your blade
    i regenerate
    verbal kung fu knock out your hearing aid
    Good comeback.....on his first round verse...blood on your blade knock out the hearing aid..
    like special ed i got it made
    crooked like cops from dade
    county
    Pretty wild...good concept like special ed got it made, crooked like cops from dade county
    you try and hound me
    yeah right your soulja
    more like soulja boy tell em
    your wack i can smell em
    hit you in your melon
    im the rap police your the felon
    nice rhyme good line...he try to hound him, like soulija he's wack they can smell, he's police he's felon..good line.
    bco
    you got a ? cat origin
    ding hit the the 10 count your on the floor again
    lyrics keep pouring in
    the only 2 slaps are given to your ? and them

    Good ending.....got a cat orgin ding hit the 10 count floor again, lyric keep pouring and slap them
    Good concepts

    Maxseveneight: 8.3
    Good verse..good lines keep up the good work.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited February 2011
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    Both battler did a good I read three round of each battler I think they were funny and enjoyable
    They came with different style....good punchlines and good concept I enjoy B.c.o dcru and Maxseveneight verses...its a tie...good luck to both

    Good battle
    Vote: tie
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited April 2011
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    Since this battle has been open for over a 7-8 weeks, I am going to declare b.c.o.dcru the winner. The way I tallied the votes is 3 people voted, including myself and all 3 rounds went b.c.o.dcru's way 3-2. If you'd like me to re-open this thread, send me a PM.
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