Post the best verse you ever wrote thread!!!!!

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jonlakadeadmic
jonlakadeadmic Members Posts: 4,735 ✭✭✭✭
edited April 2011 in Roc Tha Mic
I'm not that great at rapping but like most people I tend to write from time to time.
I'll post the best verse I ever wrote (which isn't THAT good) and ya'll can do the same.
Ya'll know you want people to see your best ? ever that you got in the vault....post it.

I'm the illest ? rapper
that no ones ever hearda
I rep Dead Mic on the track, straight murda
I'm only spittin heat like I was carryin a burna
I'd coach you how to flow,
but I dont deal with slow learners
I wanna be on forbes list with the top earners
my tables havent turn yet
so that im concerned with
Im on my David Stern ?
I dont play I own this
I'll never lose focus
I ball and i'm cultured
I'm stoned hittin roaches to deal with my emotions
so mix up the potions and pick the most potent
im dope and ferocious
im deep like the oceans but still go unnoticed
i feel like i've been carryin boulders on my shoulders
and as ive gottan older
my flows gotten colder
so much i have you froze up
so keep your muthafuckin toes up
go against us and get your throat closed up (what)

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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    damn that ? was wack !thats your best?
  • bankrupt baller
    bankrupt baller Members Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited February 2011
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    damn that ? was wack !thats your best?

    lol.............
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    im the illest emcee not in the industry
    if they cant put an end to me they wanna censore me
    givin headshots on the mic strait kennedies
    may hit your face with a book
    for invading my space forget befriending me
    i only twitter ? with twin sisters
    and still dont love em even when im rigid
    get only my ? in a bow forget christmas
    cold on them like whoreson
    oldschool like the old forums
    aint gotta battle no one
    these rappers i snore on them
    wake when they finished lock the door on them then gorge on them
    my coming is dreaded like cool runnings
    rappers get ate so much i need two stomachs
  • Aquaf!nafloe
    Aquaf!nafloe Confirm Email Posts: 5,362 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    i floe like blood work on domes/makin many feelin mini they steppin stones and gnomes/
    so let it ride/ dont interupt/dollas outa you its a diamond deep in da rough/ so you hush/
    been tryin for too long/ huslte outa here you always caught by the law/we steppin in the west and in cali they keep a vest/
    but pour it in the north the mental insane rest/ its head glued maybe its not you/ a foggy cloudy lake wit swamp eels a goo/
    its great gates wit long barz of hate/ im lookin through the window im goin no hesitate/ yo key is in the handle wont even bend/
    i came into this world to comfort a bring kin/ an improvise neva a big surprise/ill listen to yo sermon bout walkin wit blinded eyes/
    no lie lie beautiful swag and jive/ an essence to the floe that wonders and moves eyes/ so let it ride/mastermind grind higha power from a women the shackels is bouta slide/
    so come and take a trip wit me/sticker thorns is torn wit blood stains on my feet/knee deep im leo out on these streeets/ its a bandit on the lose and im runnin wit
    muddy feet.
  • BlackAX410
    BlackAX410 Members Posts: 35,415 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    Even tho my career is in its infancy/ I still spit wit great consistency/ JEFF AXEL also rhymes with great symphony/ These wack ass rappers JEFF AXEL is killin/ My lyrics will put you on ya ass like an overdose on penecillin/Comin at me wrong that ? is tragic/In the future I'll be a star and you'll be askin for paper or plastic/ JEFF AXEL the throwed off warrior/ My click will leave fans in euphoria/ JEFF AXEL the black man I'm underestimated/ A majority of these ? in the rap game is overrated/ JEFF AXEL will leave these other rappers decimated/ JEFF AXEL's style is sicker then hepatitis/ JEFF AXEL the black man will leave his fans excited/ People love JEFF AXEL's verbal Illustration/ My style has creativity and stimulation- JEFF AXEL is back 3rd verse
  • jonlakadeadmic
    jonlakadeadmic Members Posts: 4,735 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    damn that ? was wack !thats your best?

    yes. i told you i wasnt good I AINT MADE FOR RAPPIN, DAME DASH STATUS

    just wanted to see some verses
  • dwade206
    dwade206 Members Posts: 11,558 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    They call me Doogie Howser
    the way I house the doogies
    I get tv money b
    right next to doogie's goonies
    boobie louie
    rootie tootie
    fresh and fruity
    put on the purple louie
    because I'm like fresh noogies
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    dwade206 wrote: »
    They call me Doogie Howser
    the way I house the doogies
    I get tv money b
    right next to doogie's goonies
    boobie louie
    rootie tootie
    fresh and fruity
    put on the purple louie
    because I'm like fresh noogies


    the hamburger is back!
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    yes. i told you i wasnt good I AINT MADE FOR RAPPIN, DAME DASH STATUS

    just wanted to see some verses

    oh ok .your verse wasnt that bad there was alot of good rhymin
    and a few nice lines
  • dwade206
    dwade206 Members Posts: 11,558 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    oh ok .your verse wasnt that bad there was alot of good rhymin
    and a few nice lines

    ? shut ya trap
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    dwade206 wrote: »
    ? shut ya trap

    still mad i roasted you so bad you had to change your name to dwade?

    you still a lame no matter what moniker you go by

    it just the top layer you still who you were before you got here


    dwade/the hamburger gets slayed at every change of name
    get smoked like a roach no need for raid
    cant do what i can ambidextrous poppin ambiens
    writing with my left hand when it tires i just switch hands
    still he has stayed a ? off stan
    who probably writes his verses with crayons
    you prayed while i preyed and answered your prayers
    all he does now is troll the ether burned his soul
    till he dont even wanna battle anymore
    when i lace him he get wasted more than whiteboys
    when i deploy these bars like missiles he is destroyed
    just an undercover ? like metroid without the cool toys
    little boy in corduroys cant even annoy
    you are null and void
  • dwade206
    dwade206 Members Posts: 11,558 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    still mad i roasted you so bad you had to change your name to dwade?

    you still a lame no matter what moniker you go by

    it just the top layer you still who you were before you got here


    dwade/the hamburger gets slayed at every change of name
    get smoked like a roach no need for raid
    cant do what i can i write with both hands
    still he has stayed a ? off stan
    who probably writes his verses with crayons
    you prayed while i preyed and answered your prayers
    all he does now is troll the ether burned his soul
    till he dont even wanna battle anymore
    he get wasted more than whiteboys
    when i deploy these bars like missiles he is destroyed
    just an undercover ? like metroid without the cool toys

    1. I never changed my name

    2. No one is mad, its a blog b

    3. What are you a professional IC rapper, lol. Life must suck over there huh?
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    1.you did .that is why you were still stealing verses from other rapper in your battles and got dqed 3 times against me and love yal. check the credits
    2.you sure sound like your mad
    3.no i dont get paid for smashing you
  • dwade206
    dwade206 Members Posts: 11,558 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    1.you did .that is why you were still stealing verses from other rapper in your battles and got dqed 3 times against me and love yal. check the credits
    2.you sure sound like your mad
    3.no i dont get paid for smashing you

    You one of them smart/dumb ? huh? Again, my name never changed and I randomly posted Ghostface lyrics in a ? IC battle that no one really cared out of boredom.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    dwade206 wrote: »
    You one of them smart/dumb ? huh? Again, my name never changed and I randomly posted Ghostface lyrics in a ? IC battle that no one really cared out of boredom.

    like a lame would do.what american idol wasnt on?the miley cyrus show got cancelled?your girlfriend was getting pounded by your best friend?

    we will see if you troll again when the battle starts.for now on the contrary, ? shut your trap.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
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    good thread! Loove it.. but ummm here is one of my favorite and probably best verse i wrote.. well for me it is lol.. I'll let ya'll be the judge thou.its kind of long but the last verses hit hard though...(i think)

    I hail from the city of broken dreams
    Where random people you see are actually fiends
    And the sounds of sirens wail like ? babies
    The air is ? just like the streets
    And the atmosphere filled with brown clouds

    People are fortunate to have lights and water
    Access to amenities that I once lack
    And my dreams appear to be more farther
    Than the star’s, nothing to wish upon on,
    Because I rather see them fall just like my falters

    However, my roots lies in the heart of mother earth
    Where her heart beats on the great Navajo Nation
    Why is it call great, when their’s nothing great there?
    Is a question I ask.

    There you are greeted with brown people
    Full of different features,
    Perhaps one with no future
    Who resides in a home full of creatures
    Empty bottles from last night parties
    Fill’s the beautiful mother earth’s landscapes
    Now I ask, why did I ever escape?

    I had to get it together
    And find a dream I can claim
    I’ll just be with the creator and l face the consequences
    Like with the grip of the rage.

    You can call me darkness
    I’ll help you see the light,
    I’ll increase your insight, your eyesight despite haters,
    and ? money theirs work till I get paper.
    This is poverty not paradise
    Theirs money and drugs, ? , guns, murder, ? and thugs
    Cats and dogs, pure breeds and scrubs, snakes, pigs, rats,
    And more hatred than love

    Their’s no difference without evil, their’s no lost without gain
    Their’s no love without hate, their’s no pleasure without pain (always)
    Their’s no light without darkness or sun without rain
    You can’t be happy without sadness and even be proud without shame

    On junior like Moses, I’m bombing on hoes
    My raps are like compacts to help kids focus
    To many of our peeps are hopeless on the streets homeless
    Its like were hypnotize by the devils hypnosis
    And we can kick note, on a better way of living
    Were here to break free like were escaping from prison
    Got to see a few darkness, its night vision, look towards the future
    Like prophets with predictions.
    Quit with your addictions, feed the children sit here and ? that with killing our women, I spit real can you feel its real with tradition.
    Hope that eyes can see and engineers hear to listen
    Playing the position, and I’mma musician on a mission now addition with the ambition’s to receive a recognition for lyrics with ammunition
    My mind is the gutter
    I laugh at competition, making haters look dope, pimps, hoes, hustlers, bustas, bums, thieves, good times, bad times, highs, lows, angels, demons, whose down with religion, truth, lies, fact and this fiction, women, children, warriors and chiefs, you don’t believe, you can’t achieve unity. This has me in disbelief.
    Disabled are nowhere, these people are nowhere, my mother is on welfare with three kids in foster care.
    DJ’s, MC‘s, lyricist, poets, beats, suicide disease funerals and abuse is all that I see

    Their’s no difference without evil, their’s no lost without gain
    Their’s no love without hate, their’s no pleasure without pain (always)
    Their’s no light without darkness or sun without rain
    You can’t be happy without sadness and even proud without shame
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited March 2011
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    lmao, i just re-read.. a verse.. dam, i posted more than just one verse.. my bad, I apologize..
  • Plop Star
    Plop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    they say a change gon come but not today, so imma get paid, movin grams in this hallway, hallway
    they say a change gon come but not tonight, so imma get right, and go on another flight, another flight
    x2

    they say a change gon come, but right now its the same
    the streets still on flames, ? still gettin locked up in chains
    ? i tried to change, and stopped runnning these streets
    but past felonies ? up my job elgibilty
    filled out so many applications, who the ? gon hire me
    go to a interview, aint got the job but the craka already fired me
    i cant blame society,.....................

    but you cant blame me if i go back and rob that ?
    he could have been my boss, but now he just a lick
    its hard in this world, and even harder if ya black
    but i bet it'll be easier if a ? got some racks
    all the bills paid a ? blowin purple saks
    granny sayin this world aint cold no mo , cause she got a mink on her back
    they say it get greater later, and a change gon come
    but my ? still in prison and im still in the slums, damn

    they say a change gon come but not today, so imma get paid, movin grams in this hallway, hallway
    they say a change gon come but not tonight, so imma get right, and go on another flight, another flight
    x2

    my momma stressin college,
    but i had figured i already got my knowledge
    i felt like i was wasting time chasing this degree for four years
    in that time i could make 400 grand standing right here
    and to her the sense i was tryin make wasnt clear
    on the road to riches and i got the devil to steer
    2 years, and 7 jail cells later
    aint ? changed but my attitude and them courtroom elevators
    now im tryin to change to my old ways
    but thats in the past, aint no goin back to them old days



    gon come back and finish later

    *not my best but i liked it
  • Plop Star
    Plop Star Members Posts: 8,833 ✭✭✭
    edited March 2011
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    she looked me in my eyes and told me that she love me
    i looked into the sky and tried to change the subject
    sooner than later we right back on the topic
    "do you love me' im sorry loves just not option
    im too used to boppin, thats somethin that u knew
    cause i was ? yo cousin before i was ? you
    love aint for me, especially when these hoes ? for free
    and who am i to stop em from being freaks
    i leave one hoe to jump under another ? sheets
    talking bout love but you know youll ? a hunned ? besides me
    cause first night i met ya we was ? then started chillin
    its only been a month and you already catchin feelins
    but you know you gon ? any ? wit a lot of cash
    and you kno imma ? any ? with a lot of ass
    yaa im not yo first and damn sho wont be yo last
    you knew what this was from the start, so why you gettin mad?

    youre gonna love me ooooo ooooo ooo ( you know the sample)


    i like this one too......but still not my best
  • PoeticMurder
    PoeticMurder Members Posts: 41
    edited April 2011
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adovV6fPSlM

    my favorite verse is my latest verse for my new song "Lost Without You"

    *Lyrics* [Verse 1: Pete Lee]
    Although it's tough when growing up, I was a pretty destructive kid/
    We had enough but the road got rough then i learned to take more than I give/
    Is like dying just to live, a meaningless existence
    So I flipped the script, trying to recommit, because i'm sick of the emptiness within/ I been
    Vindicated against the system with a symptom/
    Fascinated by the rhythm in which i painted my affliction/
    Stained on walls that glisten crimson to escape this mental prison/
    Because we're all blessed with sight but we don't always see the vision/
    I have fallen and risen yet like a Spartan i'm driven by cataclysm/
    Because a better living's never given and i'm still alive and kicking/
    Getting over selfish feelings, quitters never win and/
    Every ending is a new beginning/
    And when the lights are dimming, i'll write you a fable/
    Kneeling by my cradle because your healing is so graceful/
    And though my heart is faithful, i'm sinning with an angel/
    ? I carry a lotta scars but Jesus Christ i'm thankful/
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adovV6fPSlM

    my favorite verse is my latest verse for my new song "Lost Without You"

    *Lyrics* [Verse 1: Pete Lee]
    Although it's tough when growing up, I was a pretty destructive kid/
    We had enough but the road got rough then i learned to take more than I give/
    Is like dying just to live, a meaningless existence
    So I flipped the script, trying to recommit, because i'm sick of the emptiness within/ I been
    Vindicated against the system with a symptom/
    Fascinated by the rhythm in which i painted my affliction/
    Stained on walls that glisten crimson to escape this mental prison/
    Because we're all blessed with sight but we don't always see the vision/
    I have fallen and risen yet like a Spartan i'm driven by cataclysm/
    Because a better living's never given and i'm still alive and kicking/
    Getting over selfish feelings, quitters never win and/
    Every ending is a new beginning/
    And when the lights are dimming, i'll write you a fable/
    Kneeling by my cradle because your healing is so graceful/
    And though my heart is faithful, i'm sinning with an angel/
    ? I carry a lotta scars but Jesus Christ i'm thankful/

    props nice verse .you shall record this