INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE *awol edition* Beat: Brian Bennett-solstice
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yeah it took this sample on repeat to get me off that writers block for a second
"its been a long time" people
everythin good? gravy? glad to hear it! write about it....get me off this damn block for good! its killin me.....
heres the beat
heres my contribution:
solstice
joint hits
moist hips
she anoints my forehead
in the backseat of a loaner corvette
our soulsticks for moments at a time
styrofoam cups of love potion number nine
luscious elevator lifts from Hades crib
patience kicks as the cd player skips
she is
that much of a good thing
I stop myself at "should we"
and jus get to touchin
undercover lover is an understatement
I plant my flag on anothers' nation
I have claimed what is mine
I'm takin it
so I do....
she was stuck at my first Haiku
that went somethin like "I always knew"
"it was always you"'s
and "soon I will say I do"
again for the first time
she read it
loved it
but it was one of my worst rhymes
dude has to be hurt
cryin
why didn't he treat his girl like I did
her presence was herbal essence
everytime I'd see her
I'd say "Hi gift"
she was my mine but his
she is mine I neglect
effect
pre-relationship defect
we left
and now all but time is left
we are in rehab for relapse of our own sins
jealousy eventually kicks in
the "who is her" and "who is him"s slip off angry lips
differences emerge like a thief in the night
gun to our love
with bullets made of light
adulterous
bad people
cheaters
divorce causers
crazy right?
just ignore the letters of tear soaked poems as inkblots
if what we have is real
we'll have to ignore the tags and just pay the price
"its been a long time" people
everythin good? gravy? glad to hear it! write about it....get me off this damn block for good! its killin me.....
heres the beat
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHFFQtqPpwsheres my contribution:
solstice
joint hits
moist hips
she anoints my forehead
in the backseat of a loaner corvette
our soulsticks for moments at a time
styrofoam cups of love potion number nine
luscious elevator lifts from Hades crib
patience kicks as the cd player skips
she is
that much of a good thing
I stop myself at "should we"
and jus get to touchin
undercover lover is an understatement
I plant my flag on anothers' nation
I have claimed what is mine
I'm takin it
so I do....
she was stuck at my first Haiku
that went somethin like "I always knew"
"it was always you"'s
and "soon I will say I do"
again for the first time
she read it
loved it
but it was one of my worst rhymes
dude has to be hurt
cryin
why didn't he treat his girl like I did
her presence was herbal essence
everytime I'd see her
I'd say "Hi gift"
she was my mine but his
she is mine I neglect
effect
pre-relationship defect
we left
and now all but time is left
we are in rehab for relapse of our own sins
jealousy eventually kicks in
the "who is her" and "who is him"s slip off angry lips
differences emerge like a thief in the night
gun to our love
with bullets made of light
adulterous
bad people
cheaters
divorce causers
crazy right?
just ignore the letters of tear soaked poems as inkblots
if what we have is real
we'll have to ignore the tags and just pay the price
Comments
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This poetic verse was ill Vsop! every line was hitting, btw, I like this beat.. I thought it was nice, something out of my ordinary and i enjoyed that.
these were my favorite lines:
she was stuck at my first Haiku
that went somethin like "I always knew"
"it was always you"'s
and "soon I will say I do"
again for the first time
she read it
loved it
but it was one of my worst rhymes
dude has to be hurt
cryin
why didn't he treat his girl like I did
her presence was herbal essence
everytime I'd see her
I'd say "Hi gift"
she was my mine but his
she is mine I neglect
effect
pre-relationship defect
we left
and now all but time is left
