b.c.o.dcru vs thedesolateone

thedesolateone
thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
edited June 2011 in Lyrical Executions
16 lines.
50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.


Due date June first/wednesday

Comments

  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    i think cru take ?
    wanna take shots ?give you eight shots
    have ya ? your self, stagger and not from the lager
    after i splatter your bladder and scatter your matter
    who knows if your dad or your mom will be sadder
    waht are you cooked on cronic?what the ? is bcod ?? cough-in on ? ?
    you outta be givin brains to hooked on phonics before i have this ? cornered,AR stock in my armpit
    turn this fake crook harmless ,face look like 'i dont want it ,i promise to go back in the closet'
    ay look dont say it to me ,tell it to facebook
    straight sonnin you, you dont want dad shunning you cause you
    takin it in the ass like its nothin new, lettin ? ? ? in you
    i know why you kept trying to insult me
    but i didnt want to battle you, it's difficult to pretend you not lousy when your bars are so sloppy
    and i dont gain no-thing
    dont make this killer bee angry, your sweet as honey
    this defeat will be stingin
  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited June 2011
    Ya got illuminati, republicans, the black panther party, and the Black Circle of Drama shawty!
    no ? in my cypher...hardly.
    Unless you mean the chic in my party of four...the ? bought along
    two other slores...while ur tweekin internal rhymes, multi's, scheams, and metaphors
    I DONT KNOW WHAT DA ? FOR!
    Let's say your! gender is "suckanigga" cause look at it like this
    since we crossed paths you been on this ? , ? , ainus ?
    desolate gets dimolished, ? , who are you foolin?
    No enviornmentalist, poetic wizard, or shooter.
    A soft bag of flesh, tallons rip thruem, two pairs of two of dem
    for this ailenated rapper, bi curious...looser!
    And I don't even know da girl fam!
    Caught showin ya ? , postin dem emotional rants
    Inferior syntax, and paragraphs....tryin advance
    specialy since....? is the flavor of this eddible ?
    let the pendelton twist, why even feed on dat ? !
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    you lost just accepted havent had much successes
    i guess its back to dresses
    and keeping food from reachin ur intestines
    no amount of votes will save you
    now in the afterdeath you make your debut
    finally be rid of what plagues you,envy of who runs the tables
    you aint got the reach to throw rocks at the reignin champ
    this ? just need a little anger management
    your two-faced like harvey dent
    abandon ship walk the plank
    if i dont get answers quick after two cancer sticks
    where do you get money hand over fist?
    bruise you and beat you
    puke food then eat you
    sound i see through your glass jaw as a preview
    to the unholy wack lyrics of evil that spews from b.c.o.dcru
    yall know i go beef stew
  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited June 2011
    I see neither verse was hot, so what? the thread ain't pop
    but you had ta jump on da ? , before one vote was dropped
    formed from hanibal lector nector, cru is an animal in da hood
    ur jus one, separate from the game...subject to sit on the wood
    each fist landing in this script, who's the champ?...not this ?
    claim ya place, ya know what's gud, for you get stripped for computer chips
    dude! We humans don't develop the way we choose, ur inadequate ? activist
    so ur fasination is understood
    ur complex is no complexity, I swear you should face it
    from my culture you should exit...? , stick to the basics
    for ur kind, that's not average lines but, facein a ?
    swallows over spits, desolate over chicks
    in abundance spreadin ya cheeks and takin em stiff
    you a lower caliber battler, your death will be swift
    I'll catch you slippin after you drop tryin edit ya ?
    leave you floored throat slit, while ya sister servin me neck
    clip ya wings, make you witness it again...and again...butterfly effect punnishment with no end
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    how bout we x this battle and have another say in a week or so ?
    let me know
  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited June 2011
    Sure. whenever.
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    alright how bout verses due the saturday after the one coming up?that will give me time to think up a stronger verse and will probably get some votes
  • b.c.o.dcru
    b.c.o.dcru Members Posts: 206
    edited June 2011
    Whenever...Make the thread and I'm there
  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited June 2011
    actually forget it and just join the tourney
    i think it may be going on by then
    good luck
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