b.c.o.dcru vs thedesolateone
thedesolateone
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50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.
Due date June first/wednesday
50 posts to vote. Votes must be explained.
No feeding, no biting, no editing verses after second person has dropped.
5 votes to win. 3-0 KO rule. Whoever has the most votes after 2 weeks wins if neither battler has 5 votes yet.
Due date June first/wednesday
Comments
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i think cru take ?
wanna take shots ?give you eight shots
have ya ? your self, stagger and not from the lager
after i splatter your bladder and scatter your matter
who knows if your dad or your mom will be sadder
waht are you cooked on cronic?what the ? is bcod ?? cough-in on ? ?
you outta be givin brains to hooked on phonics before i have this ? cornered,AR stock in my armpit
turn this fake crook harmless ,face look like 'i dont want it ,i promise to go back in the closet'
ay look dont say it to me ,tell it to facebook
straight sonnin you, you dont want dad shunning you cause you
takin it in the ass like its nothin new, lettin ? ? ? in you
i know why you kept trying to insult me
but i didnt want to battle you, it's difficult to pretend you not lousy when your bars are so sloppy
and i dont gain no-thing
dont make this killer bee angry, your sweet as honey
this defeat will be stingin -
Ya got illuminati, republicans, the black panther party, and the Black Circle of Drama shawty!
no ? in my cypher...hardly.
Unless you mean the chic in my party of four...the ? bought along
two other slores...while ur tweekin internal rhymes, multi's, scheams, and metaphors
I DONT KNOW WHAT DA ? FOR!
Let's say your! gender is "suckanigga" cause look at it like this
since we crossed paths you been on this ? , ? , ainus ?
desolate gets dimolished, ? , who are you foolin?
No enviornmentalist, poetic wizard, or shooter.
A soft bag of flesh, tallons rip thruem, two pairs of two of dem
for this ailenated rapper, bi curious...looser!
And I don't even know da girl fam!
Caught showin ya ? , postin dem emotional rants
Inferior syntax, and paragraphs....tryin advance
specialy since....? is the flavor of this eddible ?
let the pendelton twist, why even feed on dat ? ! -
you lost just accepted havent had much successes
i guess its back to dresses
and keeping food from reachin ur intestines
no amount of votes will save you
now in the afterdeath you make your debut
finally be rid of what plagues you,envy of who runs the tables
you aint got the reach to throw rocks at the reignin champ
this ? just need a little anger management
your two-faced like harvey dent
abandon ship walk the plank
if i dont get answers quick after two cancer sticks
where do you get money hand over fist?
bruise you and beat you
puke food then eat you
sound i see through your glass jaw as a preview
to the unholy wack lyrics of evil that spews from b.c.o.dcru
yall know i go beef stew -
I see neither verse was hot, so what? the thread ain't pop
but you had ta jump on da ? , before one vote was dropped
formed from hanibal lector nector, cru is an animal in da hood
ur jus one, separate from the game...subject to sit on the wood
each fist landing in this script, who's the champ?...not this ?
claim ya place, ya know what's gud, for you get stripped for computer chips
dude! We humans don't develop the way we choose, ur inadequate ? activist
so ur fasination is understood
ur complex is no complexity, I swear you should face it
from my culture you should exit...? , stick to the basics
for ur kind, that's not average lines but, facein a ?
swallows over spits, desolate over chicks
in abundance spreadin ya cheeks and takin em stiff
you a lower caliber battler, your death will be swift
I'll catch you slippin after you drop tryin edit ya ?
leave you floored throat slit, while ya sister servin me neck
clip ya wings, make you witness it again...and again...butterfly effect punnishment with no end -
how bout we x this battle and have another say in a week or so ?
let me know -
Sure. whenever.
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alright how bout verses due the saturday after the one coming up?that will give me time to think up a stronger verse and will probably get some votes
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Whenever...Make the thread and I'm there
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actually forget it and just join the tourney
i think it may be going on by then
good luck
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