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trph14
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His mannerisms give meaning to unspoken words. Unheard, he’s perched no flight. The lone broken bird. Big but yellow, the kids truly love the fellow. Mind of a rebel. A misguided misfit, no tailored dreams. His soul thirsts for popularity. The conscience mind that buries thee refuses to let him be seen as something majestic… son of royalty. Blessed without a sneeze. Conversation with the most high as a man, not on his knees
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Nice!! Enjoyed this piece, but think it would be structured as a more regular poem with new lines being started.
I really like the imagery and the 'phor though as well as how you end the poem with a man standing at the most highest plane, rather than on his knees.
Thanks for sharing.