Love Yal vs. Maxseveneight
love yal
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16 lines
Check in Saturday
Verse due By Monday
3-0 votes k.o
5 votes to win
25 post to vote
Explain votes
Check in Saturday
Verse due By Monday
3-0 votes k.o
5 votes to win
25 post to vote
Explain votes
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Check in, good luck Maxseveneight!
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I'ma drop soon!
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Maxseveneight gets tackle, in this friendly match
Cowboys vs. Eagle, get Vicks to clear your nose, your rhymes are thrash sick
Got mad because took yo chicks, left thousands of germs slick, put them to sleep
Foretold Maxseveneight use to be Penny nice now he's old blue kicks, all his lines are envy
Not slick for comebacks, gets heart attacks, when Huge Hefner I release his chicks
His life is a sleeping bag, get off my slender bars, you thru like Green Truck, parked by house bricked
This ? , neva had a good metaphor, its like tick bug, use up the raid dissmiss Maxseveneight itch
If you win this match, don't let the pride become yo priest, you known to be bashful, who don't speak
Low self esteem, no rich punches, your additude is low confidence castaway Tom Hanks, old Bill Clinton
Bronx tale get in the bus, I teach you skills like Robert Den niro, depict consist constrict his lyrics like the dentist
His bustier style weird as non bustle, time ticks, his forth grade lines are late, take uno skip card, you no illmatic
Have hyperlink highlight maxseveneight is hypersensitive, wouldn't show his real avi pic, little face from ? Tracey
When comes sitting in cinemas you cover the whole screen, Flattop hypodermic blast ya in peace, like losing hypocrites
Only in yo Nightmare Dreams, cuz you too light and very fragile, I come wack reason you couldn't take quotes of prolific
Its too Lex Luger prolix, draw out the race track, get beaten like rabbit, you stay stuck quick sand frog ribbit
Maxseveneight forfits quits the match, all you hear cricket, this match without hard trys, he's no replies, but still
Good like royal flush, don't get this match offended, its roullette is easy winning like no traffic! -
i get ferocious
love yal is hopeless
rhymes lack dopeness
dont try and quote this
keep talking ?
get left like hot wings boneless
you dont want this
im the boss
you get the cross
style so old its growing moss
lyrical 187 the cost
give me a second to pause
to show that love loss
attack the track with claws
the venom i spit is deadly
love yal aint ready
rhymes hit his physical
and ? up his face like freddie
scared to put your dukes up
your style sucks
queerer than a 3 dollar buck
ya stuck
love yal just got punked
his styles like donuts and get dunked
and get ate
for heavens sake
you dont wanna test this
never miss a chance to make u look foolish
like a fat kid never misses breakfast
you just got wrecked kid
love yall is effiminate
you will never win this battle
love yals a snake eating the apple
smack you make your head rattle
no stop crying and go tattle -
Nothing seriously.....good luck on your verse.
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good luck on yours too
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Thanks, Uppin votes
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16 lines??!
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I'd vote M78 but I don't have the required post count so I won't bother explaining why.
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thedesolateone wrote: »16 lines??!
Right 16 lines...lol maxseveneight probly has a different structure, he has the same structer when he battled Deaththreats, no offense to maxseveneight, but he need to change his format structure so people can read it 16 lines...which there nothing wrong how he types, it looks he did over 20 lines..but I'm always trying to change my structure..what do you think? -
The verses are due already, how is this battle is going to be?.....any more voters for more explainantion?
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Right 16 lines...lol maxseveneight probly has a different structure, he has the same structer when he battled Deaththreats, no offense to maxseveneight, but he need to change his format structure so people can read it 16 lines...which there nothing wrong how he types, it looks he did over 20 lines..but I'm always trying to change my structure..what do you think?
both of you look over 16 i will vote tommorrow cause i dont have time to analyze your verses now -
thedesolateone wrote: »both of you look over 16 i will vote tommorrow cause i dont have time to analyze your verses now
1.i get ferocious, love yal is hopeless,
rhymes lack dopeness
dont try and quote this
keep talking ? get left like hot wings boneless 2
you dont want this
im the boss
you get the cross style so old its growing moss 4
lyrical 187 the cost give me a second to pause
to show that love loss attack the track with claws 6
the venom i spit is deadly love yal aint ready
rhymes hit his physical and ? up his face like freddie 8
scared to put your dukes upyour style sucks
queerer than a 3 dollar buck, ya stuck 10
love yal just got punked his styles like donuts and get dunked
and get ate…for heavens sake 12
you dont wanna test this never miss a chance to make u look foolish
like a fat kid never misses breakfast you just got wrecked kid 14
love yall is effiminate you will never win this battle love yals a snake eating the apple
smack you make your head rattle no stop crying and go tattle 16 -
I'll be back to vote on this in a little bit
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punchlines:max
flow:max
rhymes:max
methaphors:max
writing technique:max
fav lines from max:13,14,16
fav things about love yal verse: When comes sitting in cinemas you cover the whole screen, Flattop hypodermic blast ya in peace
Cowboys vs. Eagle, get Vicks to clear your nose
slender bars
His bustier style
my vote is for max -
Maxseveneight gets tackle, in this friendly match..(1
Cowboys vs. Eagle, get Vicks to clear your nose, your rhymes are thrash sick..(2
Got mad because took yo chicks, left thousands of germs slick, put them to sleep...(3
Foretold Maxseveneight use to be Penny nice now he's old blue kicks, all his lines are envy..(4
Not slick for comebacks, gets heart attacks, when Huge Hefner I release his chicks..(5
His life is a sleeping bag, get off my slender bars, you thru like Green Truck, parked by house bricked..(6
This ? , neva had a good metaphor, its like tick bug, use up the raid dissmiss Maxseveneight itch..(7
If you win this match, don't let the pride become yo priest, you known to be bashful, who don't speak..(8
Low self esteem, no rich punches, your additude is low confidence castaway Tom Hanks, old Bill Clinton..(9
Bronx tale get in the bus, I teach you skills like Robert Den niro, depict consist constrict his lyrics like the dentist...(10
His bustier style weird as non bustle, time ticks, his forth grade lines are late, take uno skip card, you no illmatic..(11
Have hyperlink highlight maxseveneight is hypersensitive, wouldn't show his real avi pic, little face from ? Tracey...(12
When comes sitting in cinemas you cover the whole screen, Flattop hypodermic blast ya in peace, like losing hypocrites..(13
Only in yo Nightmare Dreams, cuz you too light and very fragile, I come wack reason you couldn't take quotes of prolific..(14
Its too Lex Luger prolix, draw out the race track, get beaten like rabbit, you stay stuck quick sand frog ribbit...( 15
Maxseveneight forfits quits the match, all you hear cricket, this match without hard trys, he's no replies, but still
Good like royal flush, don't get this match offended, its roullette is easy winning like no traffic!.....(16...
That's 16lines.....looks a lot I'm sorry.....okay I'll take the criticism...for this time.....good battle. -
I'd vote M78 but I don't have the required post count so I won't bother explaining why.
Post is 25...you have 22...three or more....voting your vote and explanion is okay.....but thanks for posting. In the mean time.....0-1 maxseveneight is in leading. Uppin more votes. -
Good match! Uppin for more votes!
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Uppin for more votes please!
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can we get more votes please
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Some more votes please!
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Those are the longest lines I've even seen. I doubt that counts as 16 from love yal. If this was the tournament, I'd make you edit that ? . Lol. But I'm not. The 2nd line sounds like a compliment when you say his rhymes are trash sick lol. I got tired reading that long verse lol. Anyway, I gotta give it to maxseveneight. His lines were just a little better. His metaphors and wording won it for me. It was actually pretty close though. I'd just like to see more lines that made sense instead of something that sounds like a freestyle. Vote - maxseveneight
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It's been about 2 months. I am going to give it to mayseveneight BC he is up 2-0. If you'd like me to reopen it for another week, like always, send me a PM and I'll do it.
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