LE Tournament #3 Round One - maxseveneight -VS- C.Melendez

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raw-material_ahh
raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
edited July 2011 in Lyrical Executions
maxseveneight -VS- C.Melendez

LYRICAL EXECUTIONS TOURNAMENT #3

Check in by Sunday, July 24, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Verses are due by Tuesday, July 26, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Voting will end on Thursday, July 28, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.

These due dates are final. Beware: 1 minute late will result in a DQ.
Due dates will be extended only when the site goes down.

Rules
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
First to 3 votes wins. (The voting panel of 5 will vote. Only their votes count.)
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!
BITING is an instant disqualification.

Take criticism like a man. Quit trying to vote sway and explain your bars in. Everyone has their own opinion.
Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread.
Good luck.
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
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    mic check one two
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    CHECK!!! should be a good battle
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    stay tuned...
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    selection process set u up for a bad day straight misery
    1st round u got the hard a way .....a bad break literally
    I got this thread bagged up sorta like Macy's
    this kid's in a pool with a shark,and the lifeguard's Casey
    Thinking he's a star..well ? i thinks he's square
    I can get him offed quicker than Lacy's or Pinky's wear
    and thats a promise Max...I pinky swear
    ya face bloodied and charred like steak cooked pink & rare
    wash this ? up imma summer eve him
    knife or pistol either way imma slump and leave him
    send him to ? yall......air born is the path for him
    Told u I was sick boy like airborne pathogens
    "10 bullets" will bury him call it "dimed" out
    this chicken is done who else wanna dine out
    I got so many punchlines i can take a winehouse buisness
    RIP 78...yo tell me how Winehouse living

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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
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    its time for your retribution
    you say your dope but who ya fooling
    your rhymes diluted
    mines pure
    you say your sick im the cure
    your such a kiddie rapper your immature
    lyrical criminal blows trial
    when its time to battle melendez acts senile
    chopping him down with my sword style
    im a whale of an emcee call me blubber
    i speak clearly while melendez studders
    i make his chicks legs spread like butter
    for you they snap back like rubber
    you aint ready to rumble like micheal buffer
    maxs a smooth talker
    if its a wack rhyme melendez is the author
    im a cereal killer fruit loop emcees i slaughter
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  • Mastery
    Mastery Guests, Members, Writer, Content Producer Posts: 14,776 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    C.Melendez - Got dayum! He ripped it. this ? came with punchlines like a mug. ? was like a stone cold killer out chea! This did it for me:
    "this kid's in a pool with a shark, and the lifeguard's Casey" (big ups casey anthony lol)

    maxseveneight - You started off kind of slow for the first few lines but you picked up steam afterwards. Your lyrics were on point but they just werent enough.

    My vote: C.Melendez
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    felt i needed to bring some massive heat with an 0-2 record ock
    I bought the EAGLES out b4 the lockout ended lol
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  • maxseveneight
    maxseveneight Members Posts: 41
    edited July 2011
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    good job melendez you brought the heat
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  • 5th Letter
    5th Letter Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 37,068 Regulator
    edited July 2011
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    c melendez gets my vote clever punchlines, wordplay and creativity with the pinky sequence.
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    maxseveneight wrote: »
    good job melendez you brought the heat

    ive seen ya work max and knew i had to come with it.....but good battle fam
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  • 7thwardslim
    7thwardslim Members Posts: 1,238 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    CeJota..... u got my vote my fam.....pinky swear.....
    u went at this dude neck, thats how a battle supposed to go...
    I mean i dont he had a chance.....u came off focused my man
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  • C.Melendez
    C.Melendez Members Posts: 1,250 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    7thwardslim wrote: »
    CeJota..... u got my vote my fam.....pinky swear.....
    u went at this dude neck, thats how a battle supposed to go...
    I mean i dont he had a chance.....u came off focused my man

    i wanted to meet u in the tourney bad Damn why u had to be late
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  • 7thwardslim
    7thwardslim Members Posts: 1,238 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    ? ? ..... Raw Material aint stopping nothing....we both real ? ..... we can go head to head one day..... im bout that....
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  • Fazeem_Blackall
    Fazeem_Blackall Members Posts: 4,216 ✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    C melendez Beasted in this Battle ? was a slaughter still shaking my head saying damn...
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited July 2011
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    C.Melendez wins 3-0. Thanks for voting.
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