Love yal vs. iMPloDEz rematch

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love yal
love yal Members Posts: 1,327
edited August 2011 in Lyrical Executions
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3-0 k.o
5 votes to win
30 votes to vote
Explain votes
Checkin by THrusday verse due by Sunday
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
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    Check in...good luck!
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
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    This birdbrain put iMploDEz back in
    The birdcage givem birdbath like holywater
    Birdhouse this birdie try to bird threat like your birdraps
    You just bird bird ?
    The biography iMPloDez is straight loser murkem with biological weopon forget the rumors
    Your education are follower are ? trying to play bipartison, your visionary on CFO
    Never certifed, throw an axe, live split life, you two face ?
    Yo chain gang is bunch of dragQUeens, I never hear them flow
    Grab this earwax wipe it next to his mic call it iMploDEz raps, blazin track never estimate my earthshaking earthshattering raps of earthquake
    Ebullient your e book ego are eccentric
    Never ecclesiastic, but non echelon, awful double helix fatality double parked
    You talk slick, next seconds you doubt yo lyrics like no ?
    Whole wannabe DE rino is straight FAkin
    He listen too much satan, I'm straight bakin him like Dunkin Donuts, Odiu en sangre and JOhnny Thunders
    You just another PLan B trying to stand by me
    You can't handle my lyrics like LUmen
    Leave his third person speaking neurosis worser cerebral palsy patient
    Certainly beholden forceful have your bars arrested like BRuce TEgner
    You try to choreography chop you up like a BUtcher
    Make iMploDEz. Chosen chowder!
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
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    Yo son, lmao im sorry but...

    ....your bars are quite the stretch, hopin’ that they elastic,
    This kid's mad ass like "Ayo, who gassed it?"
    Punchlines hit or miss like “Dog, you crashed it..”
    Talmbout Rigga, wigga you faker than ? 's that’s plastic!
    Birds everywhere but what you know about avian?
    Google it again and maybe then this ? won’t sound alien
    Foreign, get it? Boring, quit it…
    I’m snoring, you livid… ? count the Z’s
    I grab the W with ease so take this L as I lap you ? catch the breeze
    cuz I grease these p’s, add a “u”, 2 “s’” and “y” (why) I hate you is simple
    ? you ? , proud of ya dimple
    A simp whose a lame and thus gets left ?
    Stuck on the nipple, moms still aint cut you off the ?
    Stuck in her basement, son is sheltered…never even saw the city
    Home schooled dude after getting his eye blued in the gym room
    For talkin crude, this ? listen to too much fifty…who wit me?
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
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    oh my bad, check in i guess lol....i just keystyled this when I saw your verse so I didnt even think to check in.
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2011
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    oh ? ! yall goin hard
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
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    Good match.....uppin for votes...and good luck!
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    lol we got ZERO votes....but its safe to say I bodied ya ass againlol...nice verse though
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    the downfall of le is low vote count
    i am goin to vote when i have sufficient time
    this is difficult one cause both of yall went in
    i never witness love yal go this hard before:split life two face ? ,lmao
    i am workin on battle verses but i will vote on this.
    i didnt think i needed to before because i thinketh the winner was clear
    but now after readin this battle for the umpteenth time its like love yal is a better version of u-?
    i will try to be fair as possible as always
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
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    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    lol we got ZERO votes....but its safe to say I bodied ya ass againlol...nice verse though

    Lol..no votes, maybe in tournment we might battle, but we can battle any time practice or show of skills, thanks for the complement on my verse, you too had a great verse! Keep up the great work!
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  • akomax
    akomax Members Posts: 483 ✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    love yal wrote: »
    This birdbrain put iMploDEz back in
    The birdcage givem birdbath like holywater
    Birdhouse this birdie try to bird threat like your birdraps
    You just bird bird ?
    The biography iMPloDez is straight loser murkem with biological weopon forget the rumors
    Your education are follower are ? trying to play bipartison, your visionary on CFO
    Never certifed, throw an axe, live split life, you two face ?
    Yo chain gang is bunch of dragQUeens, I never hear them flow
    Grab this earwax wipe it next to his mic call it iMploDEz raps, blazin track never estimate my earthshaking earthshattering raps of earthquake
    Ebullient your e book ego are eccentric
    Never ecclesiastic, but non echelon, awful double helix fatality double parked
    You talk slick, next seconds you doubt yo lyrics like no ?
    Whole wannabe DE rino is straight FAkin
    He listen too much satan, I'm straight bakin him like Dunkin Donuts, Odiu en sangre and JOhnny Thunders
    You just another PLan B trying to stand by me
    You can't handle my lyrics like LUmen
    Leave his third person speaking neurosis worser cerebral palsy patient
    Certainly beholden forceful have your bars arrested like BRuce TEgner
    You try to choreography chop you up like a BUtcher
    Make iMploDEz. Chosen chowder!

    u lost broh , trying to explain every rhyme or word play u did is corny , let people see it or phrase ur word better , next time make ur bars nice to read ,

    iMpIoDez wrote: »
    Yo son, lmao im sorry but...

    ....your bars are quite the stretch, hopin’ that they elastic,
    This kid's mad ass like "Ayo, who gassed it?"
    Punchlines hit or miss like “Dog, you crashed it..”
    Talmbout Rigga, wigga you faker than ? 's that’s plastic!
    Birds everywhere but what you know about avian?
    Google it again and maybe then this ? won’t sound alien
    Foreign, get it? Boring, quit it…
    I’m snoring, you livid… ? count the Z’s
    I grab the W with ease so take this L as I lap you ? catch the breeze
    cuz I grease these p’s, add a “u”, 2 “s’” and “y” (why) I hate you is simple
    ? you ? , proud of ya dimple
    A simp whose a lame and thus gets left ?
    Stuck on the nipple, moms still aint cut you off the ?
    Stuck in her basement, son is sheltered…never even saw the city
    Home schooled dude after getting his eye blued in the gym room
    For talkin crude, this ? listen to too much fifty…who wit me?

    nice, u got my vote !! better that yove yall that's why
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    good vote
    i admit i give love yal some leeway cause i dont think english is his first language
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  • lovelycreation
    lovelycreation Members Posts: 1,765
    edited July 2011
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    Please! I'm better than both these ? ! Im a chick.
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    lovelycreation wrote: »
    Please! I'm better than both these ? ! Im a chick.

    I'll ? your brain through your ear while I'm hitting it from the rear nonstop till you shed a tear, dear

    Simple rhyme scheme but you get the point...make me a sammich'
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
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    akomax wrote: »
    u lost broh , trying to explain every rhyme or word play u did is corny , let people see it or phrase ur word better , next time make ur bars nice to read ,




    nice, u got my vote !! better that yove yall that's why

    Alright this battle is kind of old, Hopely I progresses little better, but I read you, work on my rhymes and wordplay, also I rushed the verse...when you type a battle verse you write first before you type, or you just key it?....and thanks I'm not offended...lol....its better you tell the truth...then hiding it...and yeah....I do want lift my skills so I sound better in audio...lol......thanks though!
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited July 2011
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    thedesolateone wrote: »
    good vote
    i admit i give love yal some leeway cause i dont think english is his first language


    Lol.....thanks...gotta go back to english class so I can get tutored by teachers.....too much getting picked on my english..lol
    Its alright...but I'm not crying.....I figure if use strong vocabulary makes my english better, what do you think?...But I'm still working my english
    Because I want to make sense, and so people read my verse better and bob their heads and feel better..lol
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    lovelycreation wrote: »
    Please! I'm better than both these ? ! Im a chick.

    .....action!
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited July 2011
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    ayo just gimmie da W for this, y'all know damn well I won...
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited August 2011
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    iMpIoDez threw more punches. Some of love yal's lyrics went so left friend on me, I wasn't sure where he was coming from but his creativity is crazy. I like the throw an axe-split life-two face line too. iMpIoDez just connected his punches right off the bat and didn't let up. My vote - iMpIoDez

    iMpIoDez is up 2-0. Besides my post, there hasn't been another post in almost 3 weeks. So ima leave it open for a few more days and if no one votes, I'm giving the W to iMpIoDez.
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  • RiGGA
    RiGGA Members Posts: 3,219 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited August 2011
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    I'd like to forfeit this battle and the one with bco, I told you I aint competing anymore.
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited August 2011
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    sionb55 wrote: »
    Is this apart of the actual tournament tho ? Should I still vote ?

    This is outside the tournament. I just voted BC I realized I hadn't on this battle but Implodez just quit.
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