ghetto mamacita

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ckfree
ckfree Members Posts: 9,659 ✭✭✭✭✭
edited March 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
she work's in the lime light's of Down-Town Chicago
strutting her stuff
like in most girl's
her make-up making her
look's like a damn clown
stridding in high heel pumps
the ? in the corner laying in the slump
reache's out and touches her fishneted leg
she slaps him away
he tells her you're nothing but a ?
there for some rich slob to get some cut
but she keeps going on
in her high heeled strut
she pulls down her skirt
even though the cut so low you can see her butt
pulls on her top
she got from a fake designer shop
she runs like a dope fiend everytime she see a cop
she works where dope dealers lurk
and cope only so much
so much pride
so much joy
boy let me tell you
you'd never know she waz a innocent little church girl
but somewhere along the way she lost hope
went from playing baby doll toys
to being a boy toy
she works one day at a time
walking down the same strip
with the same strut
hoping and praying
that the next day she won't have to work
but till then...
you can meet her on 9th
and for a few bucks
she'll see to your stuff

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  • ra-mes1
    ra-mes1 Members Posts: 420 ✭✭
    edited March 2010
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    Just kidding. Really.

    Well written (minus some spelling n grammar stuff, but that's nitpicking) lil slice of life that is true for waaay too many of the little girls out here (I live in chi-town too).
  • ckfree
    ckfree Members Posts: 9,659 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2010
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    ra-mes1 wrote: »
    Just kidding. Really.

    Well written (minus some spelling n grammar stuff, but that's nitpicking) lil slice of life that is true for waaay too many of the little girls out here (I live in chi-town too).

    nah jo, I'm not a female

    they should change the name of this forum 'Waiting to exhale'

    really though???

    smh

    good looking out, I appreciate the feedback

    and yeah, there are many females that have had their sexual awakening imposed on them. What's even more ? up, it was most likely by someone in their life that they should have been able to trust