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CDKey
CDKey Members Posts: 9
edited September 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
In attempts to breathe faster, my breath remastered
the style of delivery; me, thinking through it's imageries
Sounding off in it's symponies, a humble mic's infamy
Enter, see; I'm moving forward, never stepping to the past
Move against the grain when I meet them as the last
Even if they winning, I'm the one they have to pass
They strapping for the cash while I react to it with laughs
Somethings are prewritten, money and women? this life that we livin'?
Take whatever's given; I choose to build on it's ceiling
Boulders I'm heaving; and through the mouth I am breathing
Whilst these other artists wheezing, Amazing is the feeling
No more use in trying to highlight whatever that I used to show
A killer flow like Katrina, but meaner;
Like Tommie Smith when he raised his fist, everyone had caught the jist
Lost inside the shadow's mist, I plead the fifth till the night is lit

~I.S.~

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited September 2011
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    Waaaw, this jawn is friggin AWESOME!! I enjoyed reading this piece top to bottom, the mutli rhymes in it was off the hook, and also cause, every line hit, like i tried to see if i quote a favorite line, and this what i came up with lol...

    "In attempts to breathe faster, my breath remastered
    the style of delivery; me, thinking through it's imageries
    Sounding off in it's symponies, a humble mic's infamy
    Enter, see; I'm moving forward, never stepping to the past
    Move against the grain when I meet them as the last
    Even if they winning, I'm the one they have to pass
    They strapping for the cash while I react to it with laughs
    Somethings are prewritten, money and women? this life that we livin'?
    Take whatever's given; I choose to build on it's ceiling
    Boulders I'm heaving; and through the mouth I am breathing
    Whilst these other artists wheezing, Amazing is the feeling
    No more use in trying to highlight whatever that I used to show
    A killer flow like Katrina, but meaner;
    Like Tommie Smith when he raised his fist, everyone had caught the jist
    Lost inside the shadow's mist, I plead the fifth till the night is lit"

    keep dropping gems here, thank you for sharing :)