SMo Smo Poem #3

Smo-King Locs
Smo-King Locs Banned Users Posts: 3,380 ✭✭✭
edited November 2011 in Waiting To Exhale
dazzle
is how i leave all the critics
it was written
in the clouds, young blood stand tall and proud

my mere essence get all the females aroused
hence they ordained u the crown
but it was draped in thorns
u r Royalty, but u reign in scorn

heart un-torn
size 11 Pradas un-worn
they awaited the day of ya born

it was highly anticipated that i was destined for greatness
despite the calamities of the present

the present will be delivered, as i allow my gift to shine
unto others
my sisters n brothers
my dear sweet heart i miss her, but time move on
theres others

i've neva been a sucker, baby
i muster, to sway my ? hands and do my mack dance
all hoes get the back hand

as i sign off i am

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    the word play was SICK!!!! i enjoyed reading bits for bits...

    my favorite lines...

    dazzle
    is how i leave all the critics
    it was written
    in the clouds, young blood stand tall and proud




    thanks for sharing btw! and continue to share them words we call poetry rightchere'.... peace.