Can Someone help me finish this verse (writersblock)
RickyRich
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you got the game locked? I got that ? in custody ?
I'll destroy any obstacle u put in front of? me ?
I'm ready for whatever, so if its beef just reach the block
Got brunch of wild ? n i aint talkin bout mechine gun kelly
and they down to ride waitin for que to unleash bullets in the glock
leave you dead on the spot bullets goin thru ya belly
cut ya ? up like saw 3 leave ya scarted ? ? puzzle
yall ? been talkin ? for awhile ima hve to shut u up like muzzle
I'll destroy any obstacle u put in front of? me ?
I'm ready for whatever, so if its beef just reach the block
Got brunch of wild ? n i aint talkin bout mechine gun kelly
and they down to ride waitin for que to unleash bullets in the glock
leave you dead on the spot bullets goin thru ya belly
cut ya ? up like saw 3 leave ya scarted ? ? puzzle
yall ? been talkin ? for awhile ima hve to shut u up like muzzle
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The verse really shows an early stage of in-depth wordplay. A lot of the lines are predictable and seem forced. I could give you techniques, but I do not feel like typing them out if you will not use them. Asking someone to finish a verse for you is weak tho. Never do it again either bro. I could type some hints for you in this thread or inbox me yea.
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What he said....close thread
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Thanks very much ,because the post is very important to me!
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if u over 13 give up
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I could give you techniques, but I do not feel like typing them out if you will not use them. Asking someone to finish a verse for you is weak tho.
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haha hell yaaaa, good ? bro! the intro had me stuck. keep doin your thing
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