Florida State of Mind by VSOP *written to Elmatic Instrumental Album*
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Hard to get motivated lately but Real P's "Protestors" piece got me in the mood...already ? up day might as well put it on paper
wrote this to the Elmatic's "Detroit State of Mind" (instrumental)
wrote this to the Elmatic's "Detroit State of Mind" (instrumental)
[B][FONT="Georgia"][B] you hear that..... who's that peepin in my window BLAOW its the reflection of my imperfection wow my introspective child growin up spoon fed mouth fork eatin cereal doused from a Zephyrhills cow soundtrack is "Reasonable Doubt" walkin around the house my ? south wrapped up in a towel slides and socks a wifebeater basketball shorts "Florida" tattoed on my ? lookin at the man in the mirror wantin to ask him... "Why is it you drink some much beer brah? whutcha smoke so much weed for?" whos that man hot liquor on cold ice black hen blended with Colt four five unpack the bags underneath my eyes I know life my cup overflows as I pour "why's?" mints restin on the pillow as my mind swims in resin from Endo I've been slow since "Can it Be So Simple" instrumental I walk around with my Walkman on ...talkin to myself blazed like I'm walkin through hell aged like a bottle on the shelf I'm a dwella in a cellar a one man wolfpack howlin at the moon Yela... a storyteller since Mother Goose Magellan in the boots of a Tree's roots I breathe ? I mean I talk ? my poetry is my pulpit crazy huh? I'm nauseous about to throw up on the whole congregation......? listen up... I talk for them my dead homeboys are ? 's pits listen up... I walk through sin M.O.P. throwin elbows in mosh pits listen up... I drink often pourin regrets like faucets .......problem is my mug is empty and my blunt is not lit.... [/B][/FONT][/B]
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this was on some ? that had me feeling the same way for a minute.. playing the instrumental was nice to read along with this jawn....
you can probably ghost write for some of these wack rappers lol.. fa real VSOP!! -
word forgot about this-I got a new comp and all my writings are on my old one, still gotta transfer over. I haven't written anything in months................
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I'm guessin this got 500 views since people came in lookin for an instrumental album lol
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0_0 wowwww....you really went in on this piece...straight up non ? given concept with some raw poetry....bottom line good ? as always...keep dropping those rhymes that'll ? concrete called poetry my fellow poet
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lol I miss you guys!!!!
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good ol days huh? P, I'm looking for your ? right now trying to get off this block once again. Fatherhood got you MIA huh? lol
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