some battlerap verse for the fun of it. ill shht i promise...

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slang_doctor
slang_doctor Members Posts: 9
edited January 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
i wish i could record this but i don't have the means or know any producers. how are my rhymes on paper?

i leave mad rappers fractured
distracted like bad actors
and you know the fact is
that i got you capti-vated
with my tactics and everything
they captured.
never to be faded i'm paid
and unaided, which is undebated.
your style's like a nut after i sprayed it
i bust it, you wait to regurgitate it.
its as if i spit kids - look at this world i created
and isolated and ordered it,
set it oscillating in orbit,
i got the hemispheres quarterd
assorted races sorted and
nations bordered in.
and i'm Lord of it, consorting amongst
mere mortals again.
? on earth wandering aimlessly.
and the roof is all flames, see?
you can blame me if it came free,
and even try to aim at me.
but i got it locked from A to Z
im what you came and paid to see
im like a naked lady creativly,
keep you addicted to jain like eric avery.
my behavior is knavery,
the ? in your face tasting unsavorily,
i'll make you ? stains and feign bravery.
and with some sort of horse sense supporting me
i am a form of sorcery, and with you (reader)
we two accordingly are truth,
exceptional professionals,
turn foes to vegetables,
spit like its like confessionals in vestibules
be blessing you molesting fools.
i too rap for prisoners like vision quest,
a test of faith for a parishioner
my mission is blessed.
so pray to jay hova
i'll lay into you like the takeover.
and get on your knees to recieve
this seed. you're wack like a dck slap
get ethered, i use a pen to pack a punch
like spliff. word power sound and
the smoke it all seethers
off of burning up the reefers
like caesar's, each as his own man,
less we be violent creatures.
so before i exit,
let me take a retrospective,
on what life is, it existed,
in an ancient abyss as a
creation myth. do you feel like a
reincarnation trip?

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  • slang_doctor
    slang_doctor Members Posts: 9
    edited January 2010
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    my name is ben grose
    i keep a pen close
    i can blend quotes
    i've known and wrote
    wth head flows and i'm
    extending blows,
    to perplex and then end
    any foe. fake rappers know
    that they light and im heavy rope.
    im thick like a cuban link,
    so hot, so humid in here it stinks,
    this is a lyrical feast, i'm beasting up
    so do you think im like the kind that
    rich kids wear around they neck?
    a paycheck in the form of anklets,
    necklesses and bracelets?
    just face it, you've grown complacent.
    you're a big mess, you wreck less, kid
    sniffing Diet Coke and ? why
    am i broke? you must be sippin brew for
    breakfast, while im cool and speckless.
    if you question, the power of my solar plexus
    will reck ? . its like a verbal ?
    get vindictive, get to big dickin women
    like a lethal injection. all i get is,
    physical mention (ben grose)
    then quizzical interjection (who?)
    but lyrics are next dimension
    and essentially what i'm bessin is the
    next extension of true school
    i'm hyper extending tension at
    any stupid fool. im out for gouda
    cheese, no prudes and some buddha
    please, iwant judas on his knees,
    so i can put a cap in the beast.
    after me its disaster thats seen,
    like a pyramid structure the
    experiment's function is
    i'm real and im pumpin here
    do you feel that i'm up to something?
    i know the ropes im eatin hoes a la mode,
    smokin dope drinking whisky and soda.
    once was feeling like my life was over,
    but in control of microphones im growing
    steadily bolder. write with a pencil,
    erase experimental, love the bass in
    instrumental lace it heavy then i'm into,
    the paper chase, with my man Minsu.
    all i know's you'd better pay me on schedule.
    and if i'm not paid quick, i'd say ? you
    like it was done with an aids ? .
    because i know you got revenue,
    i got revenue too, but if they find the
    residue in your rec room your record
    could get federal. so if you know the rules,
    what you better do, is move like good head'll do
    and come quick, you know i got the dumb ? ,
    chicks i'm making some sick and i got it thumb thick.
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