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BlackRoses
BlackRoses Members Posts: 407 ✭
edited May 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
“Teach Him”
I teach him not to lie and never keep secrets
I make him into this honest reliable man that I stand by
Hoping that’ll he change his ways, I force him to strive better
Learn more and want better, I instruct him to be ? fearing no matter what ppl may say
I teach him that I’m a priceless jewel that should be kept pure
He goes to the extreme to keep me happy b/c it’s a part of his rules
I teach him to keep his eyes always on me
No other girl will want him; no other female can do him better than me
He’s never mad b/c I have no time to deal with his feelings
There’s never confusion, neither one of us can lose
I pick out his clothes, make his decisions, and think for him
The time that’ll it’ll take for him to get his self together is time wasted
I teach him my favorite spots, when to hold my hands and pull out chairs
I laugh at his jokes because that’s my role as his woman
I keep his self esteem high enough to show confidence but never cocky
That’s rule number 5, arrogance causes unnecessary heartbreak
So I teach him how to love me and when to say it
I teach all these things to satisfy my own insecurities of loving a man



If you had the opportunity to "teach" a man...would you?
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  • junegemini
    junegemini Members Posts: 2,775 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    yo...i see why you aint pass that math class...too busy making threads :(
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  • ChiefyB
    ChiefyB Members Posts: 116
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    junegemini wrote: »
    yo...i see why you aint pass that math class...too busy making threads :(

    ouch!!! damn june
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  • BlackRoses
    BlackRoses Members Posts: 407 ✭
    edited May 2010
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    junegemini wrote: »
    yo...i see why you aint pass that math class...too busy making threads :(

    HEY NOW!!! no need to bring up my heart wrenching past of failure and in completion of society's version of education *hangs head and walks to time out*
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  • Ace Boon
    Ace Boon Members Posts: 880 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    Powder Room thread.
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  • DEE-LICIOUS
    DEE-LICIOUS Members Posts: 6,088 ✭✭✭
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    junegemini wrote: »
    yo...i see why you aint pass that math class...too busy making threads :(

    uh uh uh soooo mean

    I don't want to have to teach a man anything. I want him as he comes, and if we aren't feeling each others personalities from the beginning - we dont need to be together.
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  • Darius
    Darius Members Posts: 22,649 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    this thread is nothing without pictures and crackers
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  • DEE-LICIOUS
    DEE-LICIOUS Members Posts: 6,088 ✭✭✭
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    BlackRoses wrote: »
    “Teach Him”
    I teach him not to lie and never keep secrets
    I make him into this honest reliable man that I stand by
    Hoping that’ll he change his ways, I force him to strive better
    Learn more and want better, I instruct him to be ? fearing no matter what ppl may say
    I teach him that I’m a priceless jewel that should be kept pure
    He goes to the extreme to keep me happy b/c it’s a part of his rules
    I teach him to keep his eyes always on me
    No other girl will want him; no other female can do him better than me
    He’s never mad b/c I have no time to deal with his feelings
    There’s never confusion, neither one of us can lose
    I pick out his clothes, make his decisions, and think for him
    The time that’ll it’ll take for him to get his self together is time wasted
    I teach him my favorite spots, when to hold my hands and pull out chairs
    I laugh at his jokes because that’s my role as his woman
    I keep his self esteem high enough to show confidence but never cocky
    That’s rule number 5, arrogance causes unnecessary heartbreak
    So I teach him how to love me and when to say it
    I teach all these things to satisfy my own insecurities of loving a man



    If you had the opportunity to "teach" a man...would you?

    Really though, it sounds like this is a poem about a woman teaching her son. And these lessons are ? horrible. Pick out his clothes? make his decisions? have no time for his feelings?

    This is the worst
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  • BlackRoses
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    Kimi wrote: »
    smh......see, girls are so mean to each other:p

    I liked the poem T/S

    thanx...found it in my archive of poetry on my computer:)
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  • junegemini
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    BlackRoses wrote: »
    HEY NOW!!! no need to bring up my heart wrenching past of failure and in completion of society's version of education *hangs head and walks to time out*

    my apologies

    nice poem
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  • BlackRoses
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    DEE-LICIOUS wrote: »
    Really though, it sounds like this is a poem about a woman teaching her son. And these lessons are ? horrible. Pick out his clothes? make his decisions? have no time for his feelings?

    This is the worst

    *pouts lip* it was doing my "that ? aint nothing without me cuz i made him who he is today becuz he started wearing jordans cuz i was when he met me and he stepped his clothes game up cuz i suggested some things and now he think he the ? but mind u i created him and if i was ruthless bitter black scorned woman i could destroy him as well" stage :(
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  • Bwoahmizzee
    Bwoahmizzee Members Posts: 6,962 ✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    * clears throat*

    * starts singing Musiq's song way off key*

    " Teach me how to love..............
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  • BlackRoses
    BlackRoses Members Posts: 407 ✭
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    junegemini wrote: »
    my apologies

    nice poem

    u good but mind u i will make a SPECIAL thread just for you when i take me class over this summer:)
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  • junegemini
    junegemini Members Posts: 2,775 ✭✭✭✭
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    DEE-LICIOUS wrote: »
    Really though, it sounds like this is a poem about a woman teaching her son. And these lessons are ? horrible. Pick out his clothes? make his decisions? have no time for his feelings?

    This is the worst

    lol and you talking about me

    smh Dee

    thanks for that summary though
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  • BlackRoses
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    Bwoahmizzee wrote: »
    * clears throat*

    * starts singing Musiq's song way off key*

    " Teach me how to love..............

    *stops what she's doing to listen to u sing* :)
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  • MsSouthern
    MsSouthern Members, Moderators Posts: 21,791 Regulator
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    Ace Boon wrote: »
    Powder Room thread.



    ^^^^^^^ this
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  • junegemini
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    Kimi wrote: »
    smh......see, girls are so mean to each other:p

    I liked the poem T/S

    wtf...im not mean to a particular gender, im real

    i say what the ? i want ms kimi
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  • DEE-LICIOUS
    DEE-LICIOUS Members Posts: 6,088 ✭✭✭
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    BlackRoses wrote: »
    *pouts lip* it was doing my "that ? aint nothing without me cuz i made him who he is today becuz he started wearing jordans cuz i was when he met me and he stepped his clothes game up cuz i suggested some things and now he think he the ? but mind u i created him and if i was ruthless bitter black scorned woman i could destroy him as well" stage :(

    :-/ I didn't realize YOU wrote that. My apologies. I woulda been nicer had I known, cause I'm fake like that. :( sorry
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  • BlackRoses
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    DEE-LICIOUS wrote: »
    :-/ I didn't realize YOU wrote that. My apologies. I woulda been nicer had I known, cause I'm fake like that. :( sorry

    nah...i rather u be real than fake even if its on the internet
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  • Dupac
    Dupac Members, Writer Posts: 68,365 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    real talk, but with the amount of women who ? with ? they know they shouldn't.. this poem has a immensely massive market audience..i mean, u get a chick like keshia cole, ciara or beyonce to sing it... we're talking millions
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