WRITE TO THIS BEAT! *tired of this bein empty* keystyle?!?

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VSOP
VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
edited June 2010 in Body SLAM
j. cole's " who dat " instrumental-
hxxp://usershare.net/0fzizbfc3ehu
change the ? 's to tt's
.......stop bein lazy and do it..contribute to this MOVEMENT!
lets get this ? jumpin again--i was havin fun holdin my throne and tiltin my crown LOL NEXT!!!



who dat who dat
cocky as I wanna be
im hot im hot
somethin like the summer be
wifebeat and white rees walkin down these southern streets
smokin on tiny green things lookin like a ton of peas
im geeked im geeked
yo, I must be Screech
I speak I speak
with a slurred country speech
I walk with a southern swag
atlanta braves cap fitted
flipped to the back
damn right I am high
hi....I AM LIFTED
shades on shades on
johnny blaze gone wild
I am him
I K.I.M.
I keep it movin and improvise
kick off the classics
grab some timbs and ride
my right eye covered by my brim
like I said "HI...I AM HIGH"
smokin on a philly
like an Eagles fan burnin an old T.O. jersey
like any Boston team in the playoffs
screamin for mercy
observe me
chewin on a stem wrapped up in Genesis
smokin osmosis
porkin odd hoes all over the globe
? belly oinkers
who ? like bp oilers
I am her ocean sir, she can melt all over I
and once shes done, she can get mad that I told her bye
back to the subject like Dwele
i wanna holla hey to a chick i hardly respect
and will probably neglect
I expect ill let her down
like a Chamillionaire chorus
like "its not you, its me
and its the best thing for us"
I am Horus
brother of the ? who stole the keys to the DeLorean
I am Osiris
the oldest son of NUT
funny huh?
with my eyes bent inwards and bleeding smoke
lookin back at my soul
like im starin at Isis wearin easytones
do you want to spit shine
and clean my throne?

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  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    and please dont move this----ill do this ? with the beats weekly if you want, so we can have SOMETHIN happenin in this room

    provide a beat and let people ride with it?!? everyone down?!
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    *headphones on*

    eyes on the prize
    design in the mind
    blueprint every corner
    and destiny is the fingertip
    on the objective
    my squad is code name heaven sent
    back to the melody
    i'm losing focus verbally
    mentally i'm ripping hairs off ?
    gray in the odd places
    so long since i been in high places
    try facing the recession and you bare witness
    the fitness of fellows not eating and flipping digits
    trying to get the accounts taken care of
    chaos and no solution
    i'm plotting on the mental institution
    of my fellow comrades lost minds gone bad
    madmen grown sad over the fuckery
    let em loose and run wild on whose left in the bush embassy
    enemies witness the real to the p
    whipping up a ? of good ol fashion remedy
    to cure the common focus of poetry
    cocky like my other alter ego
    finger banging fat stocky flabby chalk voiced nappy headed hoes
    meanwhile emailing footage to my fellow foes
    hoes exposed by the rosary beads
    the poet in me and ? can't separate my anxiety
    to commit adultery along with sacrificial religious insanity
    vanity road i'm walking on the mirrors all on me
    shining bright over the beat for the fellow
    of the dude that works with the devil on another level
    Illuminati paparazzi quick to pop me
    its only prophecy no haterade just simple visionaries
    that occuring to stay focus on the prize
    through my eyes i see a different disguise
    back to the system where i froze up
    losing my mind impatiently waiting for the world to blow up
    scabies scratches sicko marks and sickle cell stabbing vocal cords
    i'm lost in my ways...today i'm a become a slave to the new generation
    wear tight jeans, 80's tees, to the melody of waka flocka
    sorry for my fellow 80's babies that past away to see this
    last time living on earth bumping dmx and loxing it
    loving swizz beats before the snare got played out
    record labels drop raw ? nothing thats laid out
    over 808s and keys with the whiny pitch
    no need to ? its over with
    poor some yoo hoo over the gravesites you are going to be missed
    and ? to those that ? radical rebellious spirits
    what you can't ? is what you can embrace
    by the grace of ? and the 12 men of wisdom
    the 7th day and the sabbath
    the old and new testament
    i'm real to the p standing with a sickle
    foot on the corpse of a fellow tea bagger
    with a smirk that'll cut through the dagger
    begging ? to come after thee
    and bring many to be apart of the feast
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    *i'm sorry i got some leftovers on my mind...so much ? i gotta get off my chest*

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HbkRvclQS4M


    215 can you hear me
    through the belly of the 912
    i'm doing fine and living life like its mine
    can't wait to go back to you
    kiss of the juicy lips of your maim
    got me going insane
    trees are not my thing
    or the sounds of crickets
    miss the distance of cars bumping beans and them
    its a sin to miss you all of the sudden
    nowadays its not where you from but its where you pick up your mail
    i could go for papi hooking up the meal
    cheese steak chopping, pickles, cheese wiz, salt, pepper, and the whole effector
    lesson earn to not mess with another lady
    a lesson earn over the lady with the sex on the beach cologne
    got me going crazy
    thick to fat proportion with red color weaves
    toes done ? expressions like ehh ? you not interesting
    broke ass and can't pay even if you got cash
    on another trip here i go to the place i label 1st time residence
    meanwhile 2nd place to reside with
    and collide with plates of pure cooking
    southern cuisine and thick wife to do the pushing
    duck dodging sloppy laffy taffy daffy duck nasty trashy ass girls
    5 kids and stereotypical bids
    trees and driveways
    by ways and highways
    why isn't that dog on the lease
    why is that dude walking like he's in the east
    headphones and psp on repeat
    with a beat made by your's truly....
  • GSonII
    GSonII Members Posts: 2,689 ✭✭✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    why don't you cats just go to dopetracks.com and actually rap over beats and just keep it to your little click if you interesting rapping
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    P! yo you had a few good quotes in there but you had me readin twice when you said "mentally Im ripping hair off scrotums" lol wtf homie lol

    good piece-I was hopin this beat would get people goin

    *headphones on*

    eyes on the prize
    design in the mind
    blueprint every corner
    and destiny is the fingertip
    on the objective
    my squad is code name heaven sent
    back to the melody
    i'm losing focus verbally
    mentally i'm ripping hairs off ?
    gray in the odd places
    so long since i been in high places
    try facing the recession and you bare witness
    the fitness of fellows not eating and flipping digits
    trying to get the accounts taken care of
    chaos and no solution
    i'm plotting on the mental institution
    of my fellow comrades lost minds gone bad
    madmen grown sad over the fuckery
    let em loose and run wild on whose left in the bush embassy
    enemies witness the real to the p
    whipping up a ? of good ol fashion remedy
    to cure the common focus of poetry
    cocky like my other alter ego
    finger banging fat stocky flabby chalk voiced nappy headed hoes
    meanwhile emailing footage to my fellow foes
    hoes exposed by the rosary beads
    the poet in me and ? can't separate my anxiety
    to commit adultery along with sacrificial religious insanity
    vanity road i'm walking on the mirrors all on me
    shining bright over the beat for the fellow
    of the dude that works with the devil on another level
    Illuminati paparazzi quick to pop me
    its only prophecy no haterade just simple visionaries
    that occuring to stay focus on the prize
    through my eyes i see a different disguise
    back to the system where i froze up
    losing my mind impatiently waiting for the world to blow up
    scabies scratches sicko marks and sickle cell stabbing vocal cords
    i'm lost in my ways...today i'm a become a slave to the new generation
    wear tight jeans, 80's tees, to the melody of waka flocka
    sorry for my fellow 80's babies that past away to see this
    last time living on earth bumping dmx and loxing it
    loving swizz beats before the snare got played out
    record labels drop raw ? nothing thats laid out
    over 808s and keys with the whiny pitch
    no need to ? its over with
    poor some yoo hoo over the gravesites you are going to be missed
    and ? to those that ? radical rebellious spirits
    what you can't ? is what you can embrace
    by the grace of ? and the 12 men of wisdom
    the 7th day and the sabbath
    the old and new testament
    i'm real to the p standing with a sickle
    foot on the corpse of a fellow tea bagger
    with a smirk that'll cut through the dagger
    begging ? to come after thee
    and bring many to be apart of the feast
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    GSonII wrote: »
    why don't you cats just go to dopetracks.com and actually rap over beats and just keep it to your little click if you interesting rapping

    cuz I dont flow-I can write to a beat but no flows-spoken word maybe but the way I write, i cant stay to the rhythm of a beat-my words are white with no rhythm lol
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited May 2010
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    Who dat who dat, its me ? take a camera flick
    Im too hot ? holders couldnt handle this
    I aint fakin either
    Im burnin up, turn it up
    ? Im on fire like Im satans heathen
    Hate the breathin, but livin to the max
    sold my soul to the devil and he'll never give it back
    So im forever in this trap, in hot weather I relax
    Naw im playin lil ? im much cleverer than that
    But Mr. Rain Man promise chedder by the stacks
    So im still overshadowin whoever ride the tracks
    Relapse, back on the ? that I started with
    Illuminati the very last ? that I departed with
    I aint never been a part of it, ? I lit spark in it
    fed flames to the fuel, Me and the Devil delt a partnership
    So I honor it
    My contract is in the final hour
    Im sittin high so high up in the primal power
    That when I die my coffins outlined in dollars

    My mind is a greater place
    play the race, and I pace til the racin break
    Sight for sore eyes if the face can take
    Mask on, clap on and erase the day
    If you dont understand ? need to stay awake
    Or stay away you aint dreamin in my state of play
    My thoughts deeper than the Ocean
    Stay movin, my mind sleepin in the motions
    No, I will not quit
    Sub concious, sleepin on my concious
    Nonsense, I take souls fluid smooth no embalming
    Grim reaper on the microphone
    Set in stone no clone can achieve it holmes
    Its the kid but for the crib im'a need it grown
    Ima plant the money long til my seeds are gone
    Supersonic flow, even the waves get the speakers blown
    Its friday night, highlights til the weekend gone
    Peace
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    Who dat who dat, its me ? take a camera flick
    Im too hot ? holders couldnt handle this
    I aint fakin either
    Im burnin up, turn it up
    ? Im on fire like Im satans heathen
    Hate the breathin, but livin to the max
    sold my soul to the devil and he'll never give it back
    So im forever in this trap, in hot weather I relax
    Naw im playin lil ? im much cleverer than that
    But Mr. Rain Man promise chedder by the stacks
    So im still overshadowin whoever ride the tracks
    Relapse, back on the ? that I started with
    Illuminati the very last ? that I departed with
    I aint never been a part of it, ? I lit spark in it
    fed flames to the fuel, Me and the Devil delt a partnership
    So I honor it
    My contract is in the final hour
    Im sittin high so high up in the primal power
    That when I die my coffins outlined in dollars

    My mind is a greater place
    play the race, and I pace til the racin break
    Sight for sore eyes if the face can take
    Mask on, clap on and erase the day
    If you dont understand ? need to stay awake
    Or stay away you aint dreamin in my state of play
    My thoughts deeper than the Ocean
    Stay movin, my mind sleepin in the motions
    No, I will not quit
    Sub concious, sleepin on my concious
    Nonsense, I take souls fluid smooth no embalming
    Grim reaper on the microphone
    Set in stone no clone can achieve it holmes
    Its the kid but for the crib im'a need it grown
    Ima plant the money long til my seeds are gone
    Supersonic flow, even the waves get the speakers blown
    Its friday night, highlights til the weekend gone
    Peace


    nice homie--got me grabbin the instrumental and throwin that ? on repeat again-diggin that 2nd verse..now I gotta outdo it lol
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited May 2010
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    The best one winnin
    take shots no shotgun engine
    ridin shotgun is like 10 different woman
    Im in it, records blaze spinnin, straight fire ball spittin
    I ball my way other ? ball different
    We not the same your pager cant page me
    straight vegan how I eat the beats daily
    Go buy yourself gold chains, I buy plasma cause im to hot
    you dudes not ready for the new ? , ew ?
    Wait up, hater, back on that heavy tip
    Every chick bet he with, black or that becky ?
    this tracks straight sexyness,
    your highness
    fall back the spots behind where mines is
    Im flyin yall barely fairy floatin
    dreamin, must of bumped of your head like Gary Coleman
    very open, say it like I own it
    stay up in the moment,
    game too easy straight layups when im on it
    Chozen, ? blessed when Its spoken
    No folkin, if so you ? do too much smokin
    Leader of the pack yall middle like the yolk is
    straight focused, laser beam mind frame
    different level, yall praise the teams that I blame
    Quit braggin talkin business, ? aint in my lane
    Investments, yall invested in nine chains
    I got houses, shops, and a job to
    Your mouth stops runnin where the blocks do
    You gotta run to the roadblocks that I walk through
    So talk dude, I run the city like Barrack do
    Im not you, not dude, not either ?
    I do me, yes me Im ether ?
    Talkin greasy like a city slicker
    these cats is full of ? call em kitty litter
    Mc critizing, label me the dope type
    After this J. Cole gone ask for the ghost write
    I dont even rap and a ? got the most hype
    I live for now so right now let me toast life
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited May 2010
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    Too lazy to drop a beat
    so i just go in for a few
    while the beat is going through
    my ears from buds
    the drugs I yearn for to keep my sanity sober
    is lone gone
    no ? to dive in and wife is sleeping
    repeating same steps of failing repentance
    its like marriage is a death sentence
    with no forgiveness
    bare witness to the fitness of putting my all
    into a keystyle stroking the bar one by one
    sitting prop up like a dean
    typing words so obscene
    tired and tried to get my focus
    but the sleep is draining me
    sustaining me from dropping something deep
    daydreams of nightfall wishes
    women coming in to bare witness
    the truth behind real's madness
    the proud owner of the poetic tongue
    going up and down middle regions and places
    unseen to the female eye
    why o why must i be like that
    the irresistible nasty cat
    chasing women with dog effects
    flexing my flabby pecs in the mirror
    failing to see the mirror is joking with my eyes
    sagging like old man tendencies
    chubby face and lack of energy
    watching bet feeling like huey free...man
    nothing the ? on and tired of black folks
    tired of every region being ball less freaks
    trying to preach and teach
    western philosophy...the American goal
    ? money up while obama becomes a steak on a pole
    ideas and thoughts trained to the sick deprived red
    while my blue ? is resting in need for independent head
    easy on the sides of democracy and hypocrisy
    stroke the genius that is real to the p
    sorry for the nasty remedies folks i'm tired
    and broke
    a joke making beats on beaterator provided by timberland
    while real nigs dropping epics on mpcs and keyboard notes
    silly bastard I...feeling sorry for my....self infliction gun wound
    need of sleep like hole in head but can't shake the midnight movie flicks
    the porn, the thoughts, and some convo for a bit
    wrong in so many ways...my side of the bed cold chilling
    sides of my eyes bold concealing
    the channel changes are redundant like old chili
    bored ? rhyme.....good night
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
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    The best one winnin
    take shots no shotgun engine
    ridin shotgun is like 10 different woman
    Im in it, records blaze spinnin, straight fire ball spittin
    I ball my way other ? ball different
    We not the same your pager cant page me
    straight vegan how I eat the beats daily
    Go buy yourself gold chains, I buy plasma cause im to hot
    you dudes not ready for the new ? , ew ?
    Wait up, hater, back on that heavy tip
    Every chick bet he with, black or that becky ?
    this tracks straight sexyness,
    your highness
    fall back the spots behind where mines is
    Im flyin yall barely fairy floatin
    dreamin, must of bumped of your head like Gary Coleman
    very open, say it like I own it
    stay up in the moment,
    game too easy straight layups when im on it
    Chozen, ? blessed when Its spoken
    No folkin, if so you ? do too much smokin
    Leader of the pack yall middle like the yolk is
    straight focused, laser beam mind frame
    different level, yall praise the teams that I blame
    Quit braggin talkin business, ? aint in my lane
    Investments, yall invested in nine chains
    I got houses, shops, and a job to
    Your mouth stops runnin where the blocks do
    You gotta run to the roadblocks that I walk through
    So talk dude, I run the city like Barrack do
    Im not you, not dude, not either ?
    I do me, yes me Im ether ?
    Talkin greasy like a city slicker
    these cats is full of ? call em kitty litter
    Mc critizing, label me the dope type
    After this J. Cole gone ask for the ghost write
    I dont even rap and a ? got the most hype
    I live for now so right now let me toast life

    ROFL @ your kitty litter line lol good read-you killed it with those last 5 lines
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
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    religious ? speaking tongue for the strokage
    ? sick nasty prevented laying skeet on temples
    lesson learn and earn to yearn for the simple
    pound to pound sweat and tears
    the ? in me is in thee blood
    been a flirt since the days of doug funnie
    chasing patty mayo
    looking at young jawns legs and thick thighs
    high off of vic secret's and peep this
    sniffing teen residue
    finger ? the best vaggies since 2002
    funny style simping ? chasing a picture with a wolf persona
    meanwhile i'm bowing giving woman verbal business
    whipping out the lasso past the tassel to the followers
    that chase my descriptions of tweeting ?
    menace to bedrooms...the Allegheny ? snatcher
    mugshot mean mugging hip hop junkie generation ? flunky
    tight pants laughing at baggy jean o.g.
    shaking my head at whippersnappers and young ins
    that swear they the truth because they getting a number or two
    i reinvented the sly smart guy recruitment
    never ever bow out or bow down to visual failure
    reach for the stars and keep in my agenda resembling good behavior


    lol just a whatever keystyle
  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
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    Don't know if there was a specific format or topic but I dropped a couple lines on the Cole beat...

    Back with a flow solid as the rock you lean on,
    You depend on me for a boost like you was drivin a neon
    Jump startin the game, puttin this track on the map
    Cause when you whack, you couldn't hold half my ?
    Like an overflowed toilet, I took this beat and I soiled it,
    ? on the mic with disregard like Ike and them fifty broads
    Been out for a while, but I been inspired to come and wreck this
    Goin half-assed on this flow like the Lakers facin the Celtics
    It's like an apocolypse when I spit,
    Like a trick gargling on my tip
    You pitchin into the 9th without a hit
    Better bet I'ma break you when I let a line rip
    When I put pen to paper I make miracles happen
    It ain't rappin, it's what I like to call lyrical magic
    I drop a flow and the masses get a little estatic
    I leave a mark where I drop that's akin to Titanic's.


    All right flow two, time to freshin it up,
    Like MJ in his prime, I'm goin to the cup
    Spittin hard like the bass on the beat
    Takin over the game like Kobe when he's facin defeat
    Feelin it in my veins like blood runnin through
    No tellin what I'ma do when I start sippin on a few
    Flow is unpredictable, swagger untouchable
    Comin at you hard, I'm like Lewis when I rush at you
    You don't wanna test with this,
    I'm gonna have to contact your next of kin
    Cause I'ma send you for a swim like you was an illegal mexican
    Don't get mixed feelings homes
    Just spittin what comes to the dome
    Givin you a beatin as if I left you home alone
    Death on a beat, you'll find peace in defeat
    You'll never know power til you walk the streets in my feet
  • REAL_POETICAL
    REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
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    Spiritually draining i'm enduring
    another night of mental exploring
    to the point where i can't ignore
    the simple things that i adore
    the life that's lavish and scent of allure
    the pure sounds of success beats like pounds
    of everlasting drum tapping
    rhythm twirling like ? like flapping
    tap dancing with destiny while fate just arrested me
    stress i beg upon in the precinct
    trying to live life decent but recently
    i'm really not in the mood to be all that i can be
    army ceremonies of dedication and excellence
    yet i'm sloppy Golmer Pile
    surprised my hopes don't go along the nile
    literally my spirit is walking the green mile
    on the road to redemption
    i mention gods name and hear the sound of giggling
    appealing to a modern day atheist
    typing my life away blogging with no repentance
    silly and losing it without a bit of forgiveness
    for my actions that my foes around me are bound to witness


    pray for me
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited June 2010
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    trumpets and trombones are my soundtrack when I enter the room
    every step is deep like bass,
    unlace the Ree's and feel the boom
    John Blaze before Pun did it
    hottest flames, I am liquid
    illmatic and I am sickening
    pill addict that likes Guinesses also
    been away for a while like shyne po
    now I'm back with palsy flow
    I talk slow, I walk slow
    I am Dro
    hear it in my chopped up southern drawl
    Hootie Hoo is still my blocks southern call
    dog
    when you thinkin bout breakfast
    I'm thinking bout lunch
    its the same thing cuz at 2 pm I'm eatin Captain Crunch
    jus woke up
    got blunted
    forgot somethin
    remembered..then forgot it again
    I was supposed to do somethin besides hustle today

    now what was it?

    I entered this smoked filled room
    lookin like D'angelo just shot his 1st video
    opened the tomb
    which is my shoebox of dutches and crippy smoke
    give me hope
    instead
    it gave me dope
    my thoughts inject every letter in my poems
    I fold them in to paper airplanes
    knowledge is addiction
    so I throw to them who can't see me through these words
    I am the one?
    no I'm not


    wait...Uno Reverse