Drop some bars

RickyRich
RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
Drop some bars see wat yall got
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  • grYmes
    grYmes Members Posts: 2,350 ✭✭✭✭✭
    It's in my profile too but ? it, let's see some feedback.

    My pen invokes madness to the average
    Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage
    I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around
    Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound
    Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind
    Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time
    Crawled a river of ? , out clean the other side
    I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies
    In these youngsters, who don't know the difference
    Between the trigga man or the character witness
    Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly ?
    on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin
    Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red
    ? Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead
    Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high
    ? applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky
  • RickyRich
    RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
    grYmes wrote: »
    It's in my profile too but ? it, let's see some feedback.

    My pen invokes madness to the average
    Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage
    I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around
    Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound
    Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind
    Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time
    Crawled a river of ? , out clean the other side
    I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies
    In these youngsters, who don't know the difference
    Between the trigga man or the character witness
    Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly ?
    on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin
    Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red
    ? Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead
    Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high
    ? applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

    u from toronto ?
  • RickyRich
    RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
  • RickyRich
    RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
    "he was persuaded, to work late in the kitchen,
    another student without a family paying his tuition,
    he envisioned a life far beyond his experiences,
    though the rat races last place, stuck washing dishes,
    ? at the orphanage, grouped him with the troubled kids,
    never had the opportunity to prove that was talented,
    he had a gift, but no way to manage it,
    now lost the confidence his mother gave to him,
    he once saw stories as the decks were spinning,
    could hear the art when reading what was written,
    either up on the wall or Ether down on the page,
    and could read what the heart of breaker would say,
    he’s a cultural kid that got lost in the system,
    fighting his way back through work and education,
    though at times he questions his will to stay or not,
    coz he only feels at home when his 'phones play that hip hop..
  • grYmes
    grYmes Members Posts: 2,350 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Worl'boss wrote: »
    grYmes wrote: »
    It's in my profile too but ? it, let's see some feedback.

    My pen invokes madness to the average
    Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage
    I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around
    Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound
    Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind
    Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time
    Crawled a river of ? , out clean the other side
    I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies
    In these youngsters, who don't know the difference
    Between the trigga man or the character witness
    Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly ?
    on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin
    Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red
    ? Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead
    Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high
    ? applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

    u from toronto ?

    Naw man, Maryland originally. Live in Louisana now. Feelin the verse by the way.
  • RickyRich
    RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
    grYmes wrote: »
    Worl'boss wrote: »
    grYmes wrote: »
    It's in my profile too but ? it, let's see some feedback.

    My pen invokes madness to the average
    Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage
    I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around
    Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound
    Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind
    Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time
    Crawled a river of ? , out clean the other side
    I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies
    In these youngsters, who don't know the difference
    Between the trigga man or the character witness
    Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly ?
    on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin
    Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red
    ? Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead
    Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high
    ? applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

    u from toronto ?

    Naw man, Maryland originally. Live in Louisana now. Feelin the verse by the way.

    oo cuz u mention rob ford which was my mayor of my city lol. Respect
  • TonyDubbz
    TonyDubbz Guests, Members, Writer, Content Producer Posts: 19,261 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Garbage ass thread by a garbage ass poster
  • grYmes
    grYmes Members Posts: 2,350 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I sense prior beef... Everybody got issues this week lol.
  • DOPEdweebz
    DOPEdweebz Members, Moderators, Writer Posts: 29,364 Regulator
    we got a battle thread for that
  • SouthsideShawn
    SouthsideShawn Members Posts: 280 ✭✭

    Heres my conversations with mama
    Been trying to stay away from the drama
    some reason this ? keep on following me
    I know be stressin you and dad out sorry for that mama
    Idontknow about my future cuz that ? aint lookin to clear for me
    Havin vision of my death in my dreams ? so unreal to me mama
    You Should hear what these ? are saying about me mama
    They Trying to take me away from you hope you can say pray for me mama
    Aint been easy as of late im trying to be the best son for you mama
    I Remember all the things you did for me and its appreciated mama
    All those lates nights you spent helping me with my homework
    even though you had to wake up early next morning for work
    But some how you ended up getting everything done
    No one women can ever take your place mama you always be number one
    I know You watching how much i been drinkin as of late hoping i will stop
    you dont want me turn into my uncle with a missing liver i promise mama i will stop
    Feeling stressed out sucidial thoughts running thru my mind like everyday
    asking ? what does it take to fix a broken soul and can he take the pain away
    I know You want me to become a policer officer one day but thats not me mama
    I know you don't understand right now why but soon you will understand mama
    Dad always told me he was glad he found you cuz he knew you was the right one
    everything takes time but im still searching for my right one
    Mama I kno You Try rearrange me and Jel to get back together
    but she not ready for this life, Just maybe one day we can get back together
    Told you about L how much I love & care for her but you said she not the right one
    Took Me awhile to realize but damn your right mama she wasnt the right one
    Thought she was the girl of my dreams
    but she out here chasing a ? with a fake balla dreams
    Cant blame her mamma im not the one for her
    maybe just maybe one day i can be the one for her
    I kno i should chasin these girls until im 69 Yrs Old
    But im only 23 still got time before i turn 69 yrs old

    i did disz over this
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ix7Xu2TAVc

    what should i change up and does it sound wack . everythin i sed it 100percent true
  • illestni99ainne
    illestni99ainne Members Posts: 5,365 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I don't really be rhyming like that but here yall go...

    TRAVELING PATIENTLY ON DAMASCUS, THE ROAD TO DIVINITY/PRAYING TO THE LORD THAT I WILL BE MORE THAN JUST AN EMCEE/THIS LIFE IS KILLING ME, THERE HASTO BE MORE TO ITTHAN THIS/LIFE CAN`T ALL BE ABOUT POPPING `CRIS, KILLING NI99A`S AND POLITICS/ASKED THE LORD THAT IF I DIED TO PLEASE TAKE CARE OF MY NEXT OF KIN/BUT MY PRAYERS FELL ON DEAFENED EARS, THROUGH THE YEARS I`VE LED A LIFE OF SIN/IT TOOK THE DEATH OF MY GRANNY TO WAKE ME UP FROM THIS WICKED HIPNOSIS/WHO TOLD ME TO BE WITHOUT ? IS LIKE YOUR SOUL IS CHOKING/BEING ON THIS EARTH IS NOT A RIGHT, BUT SOMETHING YOU EARN/JESUS PAID FOR OUR SINS WITH HIS LIFE, NOW THE FAVOR MUST BE RETURNED/MY MEMORY`S CAPACITY CANNOT REMEMBER MY DAY OF CONCEPTION/SO I`M THANKFUL BY CARRESSING EVERY DAY, EVERY MINUTE, AND EVERY SECOND/THIS LIFE`S A BLESSING DUKE, SO WHY NOT PRAISE OUR ALMIGHTY CREATOR/BECAUSE AT HEAVEN`S GATES ALL WILL FALL TO THEIR KNEES KNOWING HE IS OUR SAVIOR/NOT TRYING TO COME OFF PREACHY DAWG CUZ IM FAR FROM SANCTIFIED/BUT I`VE SEEN THINGS MOST MEN WON`T SEE IN THEIR ENTIRE LIVES/WALKING AROUND THIS COLD CITY, DEAD TO THE WORLD/STRUGGLING DAY TO DAY TO SAVE OUR ONCE BLACK MIGHTY PEARL


  • dj pre-k
    dj pre-k Members Posts: 1,604 ✭✭✭✭✭
    see me in da streets and im on dem 29s
    all i eat id fried meat and pork rhinds
    i dont put mayonaise on my bread
    pimpin aint dead hoes just scared
    i dont break dance, ? that ?
    im into doin things like ? yo ?
    i got mad skills dawgy dawg word up
    ill murder your whole family for fun word up

    im ill
  • narv
    narv Members Posts: 59 ✭✭
    chorus)3x

    everyday us smokeing, every day us praying.
  • shit happens
    shit happens Members Posts: 10,739 ✭✭✭✭✭
    ain't no hoes in here foh

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  • narv
    narv Members Posts: 59 ✭✭
    smokeing maryjane, high as a spaceship. praying to lord
    that I reach the top. like diamonds keeping it rocking. music
    up as the spliff blazeing. snow or rain still grinding.
  • miamaus
    miamaus Members Posts: 15
    i find it very good
  • dj pre-k
    dj pre-k Members Posts: 1,604 ✭✭✭✭✭
    me and narv turnin in tha lac
    got a big subwoofer in the back
    i goes boom when i want it to
    im sick ah choo i got tha flu
    i need a shot only one and ill make it
    i speiclaize in gettin hot girld naked
    when im flowin you know im tha best
    i brush my teeth with crest cuz im fresh
  • Paco Mansin
    Paco Mansin Members Posts: 2
    Step your game up homie..Really..!!
  • teammedia
    teammedia Members Posts: 35
    grYmes wrote: »
    It's in my profile too but ? it, let's see some feedback.

    My pen invokes madness to the average
    Strictly raw, no additives root the cabbage
    I'm fresh produce, no need to shop around
    Even Rob Ford can't help but drop a pound
    Raised up on Shoulin, purple tapped my mind
    Verbal intercourse, smashin walls with pressure & time
    Crawled a river of ? , out clean the other side
    I do this to keep da judas arms length the trouble lies
    In these youngsters, who don't know the difference
    Between the trigga man or the character witness
    Too much ice in that Thugs Passion, these silly ?
    on crushed aspirin, fallin down but no ones laughin
    Keep a line of rappers bodies traced with the chalk in red
    ? Ranger Rick, Grymes amongst the Walking Dead
    Carry on tradition keep the Iron Flag high
    ? applauds Liquid Swords as they pierce solid sky

  • teammedia
    teammedia Members Posts: 35
  • MattyCee
    MattyCee Members Posts: 1
    Heres some dope bars lemme know how you feel about em
  • Preach2Teach
    Preach2Teach Members Posts: 3,429 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I don't drop bars, but I'm known to drop a ? draws
    pull out the 45, that's how I settle all scores
    stick it to your head and tell you "give me everything that's yours"


  • RickyRich
    RickyRich Members Posts: 13,062 ✭✭✭✭✭
    ima put an instrumental and everyone gotta write a verse to it.
  • TonyDubbz
    TonyDubbz Guests, Members, Writer, Content Producer Posts: 19,261 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Trashy ass thread by a trashy ass poster

    if yall tired of rhyming over Drake instrumentals come on over to the battle thread in the reason!
  • Preach2Teach
    Preach2Teach Members Posts: 3,429 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Victory lap with your ? on my lap
    in her teeth there's a gap from when you gave her a slap
    when I see you it's a wrap you'll be taking a nap
    cos when i snap I'll be pushing your cap back





    ^^ Best bars so far??