LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - Disciplined InSight -VS- frozenheartwjlb
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Disciplined InSight -VS- frozenheartwjlb
- Check in by Friday, March 25, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.
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Check one, two...
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Count me in
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Yo frozen, take your time homie. D.I. has skills. Interested to see how this one turns out. Verses due by tomorrow midnight E.T.
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Yeah man. I checked his battle from the 1st tournament, he's good. This is the first battle rap I have done, so I am playing around with different punchlines right now. I should be droppin in the next hour or so.
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I'm a militant, runnin on pure adrenalin,
Preachin disciplin without proper InSite,
He's really just a small man in need of Inzite,
Victory is in my sights, my foots on your neck never coming off,
Thinking your flows sick when its barely a cough,
Prepare for the loss, I'm the voice of a generation,
Contemplatin how you were already ? , no ? ,
The reason you lost.. Your lyrics suffer constipation,
No hesitation, I got the championship claimed, reservation,
Gettin off on destroying you, I call it ?
Never lacking motivation, I know my fate
While you get ? like a ? , no second date
Second rate lyricist tryin to step to me,
When I know your flow, its fake Esco, you see,
I'm ready for war, like a Kamikaze from Nagasaki,
Steppin to Frozen just know it takes more than an A-Bomb to stop me. -
this going to be good
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Man... So D.I. missed the deadline?
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I need an extension....
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nah man... let D.I. post... i want my rematch from last tourney...
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I seriously been working, and totally forgot about the deadline..if I can get an extension until tomorrow I would appreciate it.
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I mean this is my first time doing these tournaments, so I don't know how it works. But the extension decision is up to Raw though right?
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Just giving my two cents...
Disciplined InSight is the reigning champ so we should give him the benefit of the doubt and let him post.
Frozenheart you came raw with it and I think this battle could be an epic one.
Would be a shame to see the champ of tourney #1 go out on a DQ. -
It would be a ? move if I was not cool with an extension, and besides no one wants to win on a DQ, winning that way makes my verse worthless. 24hrs is too long of one though. I would be down with giving him until Noon.
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I'll drop this..I sent a PM for the extension...
I'll ? this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
My prose a royal flush after ? on you this match is poker.
You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
Paint this ? like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
Pay the price it's over. Your spits ? and low in spark.
Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to ? a Frozenheart.
So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
So prepare, stand..and fall without aid ? your care plans.
He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking. -
i really thought we had a upsetting about to happen but the rebuttal was strong from insight
frozen heart going to be strong in these tourneys had flow and everything to win but insight threw some nice shots back
I'll ? this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
My prose a royal flush after ? on you this match is poker.
You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
Paint this ? like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
Pay the price it's over. Your spits ? and low in spark.
Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to ? a Frozenheart.
So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
So prepare, stand..and fall without aid ? your care plans.
He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking.
The bolded is what won me over the eminem teeth or cavities however u said it was 1 of my favs
good battle though -
Frozen heart had some good bars, word play was on point.. The flow was grasped after reading into 3-4 bars. Came with creativity but I feel it lacked some punch lines.. Out of 10 I'd give it a 7 cause when its a battle, your going in for the gusto not the cream..
Now, Di, came really strong. His verse was up to par, metaphor was nice, and had the multi's going.. And his punch lines hit harder than frozen. Over all, Di braught it.. And that's I love in battles!
Therefore my vote goes to the champ DI..for all the reasons I've mentioned above..
Thanks for letting me vote.. Peace! -
frozenheartwjlb got the drive to spit. I'm sure it'll sound sick in audio but I wasn't seeing anything real hard worth quoting. Some boast but some personals. Lack of metaphors. Overall decent verse from frozenheartwjlb. Ad far as Disciplined InSight's verse goes, I've seen better. The D/teeth line was sick though. The rest of the verse ranged from decent to above average but it was enough to get my vote BC there wasn't as much filler. Vote - Disciplined InSight
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I'm not going to lie, I was hoping for DI's downfall.
Frozenheart had one of the doper verses I have seen on here in a minute and it SEEMED like he might have had DI a little shook.
But DI spits out those multis and body blow punchlines so effortlessly that even my hating ass had to admit DI had the stronger verse.
I'd like to see more of what Frozenheart has for us in the future because I have a feeling he was just warming up.
MY VOTE: Disciplined Insight -
This battle was very good, I enjoyed both verses from Frozenheartwjlb and Disciplined Insight
Favorite line from Frozenheartwjlb: the reason you lost..your lyrics suffer constipation, no hesitation I got the championship clamied, reservation
Favorite line from Disciplined Insight: he's ripped in a grizzly manner, and I'm not using bear hands I swear man your verse soft your skull I'll break open
Both verse came strong
Punches:tie
Multies:tie
Metaphor:tie
Creativity:tie
Structure:tie
Flow: frozenheartwjlb
Hard choice...my vote: frozenheartwjlb...stronger verse....good luck to both battlers. -
REAL GOOD BATTLE...BOTH BATTLERS DID THEY THANG
FROZEN:
I'm a militant, runnin on pure adrenalin,
Preachin disciplin without proper InSite,
nice wordplay, decent jab, ok opener
He's really just a small man in need of Inzite,
Victory is in my sights, my foots on your neck never coming off,
Thinking your flows sick when its barely a cough,
decent punch on the end, 1st line was filler
Prepare for the loss, I'm the voice of a generation,
Contemplatin how you were already ? , no ? ,
nice wordplay, decent jab, nice metaphor
The reason you lost.. Your lyrics suffer constipation,
No hesitation, I got the championship claimed, reservation,
nice wordplay, nice multi's, nice metaphor
Gettin off on destroying you, I call it ?
Never lacking motivation, I know my fate
While you get ? like a ? , no second date
nice first line, ok jab on end
Second rate lyricist tryin to step to me,
When I know your flow, its fake Esco, you see,
nice flow, nice wordplay, nice jab
I'm ready for war, like a Kamikaze from Nagasaki,
Steppin to Frozen just know it takes more than an A-Bomb to stop me.
decent closer
Insight:
I'll ? this poser with one snap in fact it's over.
My prose a royal flush after ? on you this match is poker.
nice wordplay, nice multi's, nice jab, nice opener
You lack composure, your punches failed this punk is frail.
You Frozen so melt in my flames..just another chump in hell.
nice wordplay, decent jab
You'll get stomped as well. A shame you're white from the D.
You biting on one Eminem too many..it's not nice for the teeth.
nice wordplay, nice multi's hard punch
Ain't no fight in this geek. He'll die by his own devices.
Paint this ? like a still life..inaminate and lifeless.
nice wordplay, nice jab
Pay the price it's over. Your spits ? and low in spark.
Take a ice pick to the chest..the only way to ? a Frozenheart.
solid punch, nice metaphor
So I'll concave your jaw and make this battle a short summary.
One shot'll make you Niel, son..except this Naked Gun's no comedy.
nice set up jab and then solid punch
So prepare, stand..and fall without aid ? your care plans.
He's ripped in a grizzly manner..and I'm not using bear hands.
nice wordplay, hard metaphor at the end
I swear man..your verses soft your skull I'll break open.
I'll leave ya face open..like snitches with buck 50's now the place soaking.
decent closer
Punches: Insight had more landed shots
Metaphors: tie
Wordplay: Frozen edged him out
Multis: Insight had more multis
Structure: tie
Overal Post: Insight took it when I count up line per line...
Vote: Insight
Frozen took on the champ and held his on wit this being his first text battle..much respect -
Thanks for the input guys, I'm going to have to step my game up though for next time lol. D.I. next tournament I am coming for ya, haha. I might start working on my 16 now so when the time comes I will be on some No Vaseline/Ether type ? haha. Good luck to everyone, and I look forward to seeing who takes this battle home. I am open for any open challenges, so get at me. I look forward to battling you guys.
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No doubt..good battle Frozenheartwjib...
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Congratulations Disciplined InSight. You're moving on. Next tournament in the summer frozenheartwjlb!!
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