LE Tournament #2 ROUND ONE - C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation
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C.Melendez -VS- ItzGravitation
- Check in by Friday, March 26, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Verses are due by Sunday, March 27, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
- Voting will end on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 11:59 pm Eastern time.
Mandatory 16 lines.
Only one round.
5 votes first wins or most votes wins when voting is over.
3 votes to 0 votes is a KO.
50 posts to vote unless you are participating in the tourney.
All votes MUST be explained well and no crew or hate votes.
NO FEEDING!!!
Take criticism like a man. Everyone has their own opinion. Use the Predictions/? Talking Thread to voice your opinions, not this battle thread. Lastly, caught biting will disqualify you. Good luck.
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Checking in now
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im here turn my mic up...turn me down
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just saw this thread haven't been on but if im dqed im good if not i'll whip up a verse real quick for sun
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so i can drop my verse whenever aye?
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i guess i'll wait to see if its still going
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You both are checked in. Verses can drop anytime. Good luck.
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ok i'll have my verse in by tonight
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C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,
, I’m just saying like Goku
Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun
You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.
Who you think you ? with? We aint gangbanging on Beyonce.
I'm lava you picante, i'll eat you an entree
Ill with the pen, murder Inc, no Ashanti.
I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play
The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.
I hulk smashed this ? Bruce Banner full of Gamma
My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.
Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.
I dont give a ? , like a window pane, you see through.
I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.
By the way i'm jewish, this ? Hebrews.
I am number four, fireman, C2 -
ItzGravitation wrote: »C.Melendez, square like Sodoku,
, I’m just saying like Goku
Or Gohan, I run it like a Shogun
You tongue kiss the hoe and I just busted on yo hoe tongue.
I go dumb; I go nuts, you sweeter than a donut.
I’m bout to act a donkey you a white girl with no butt.
The first verse was the worst the ppl said it wasn’t sick enough.
You know that ? is, ? ridiculous.
I hope that’s not biting, if it is may the lightning.
Start striking, me times ten before the night end.
The winner takes it all like that song by ABBA.
I hulk smashed this ? Bruce Banner full of Gamma
My radiance it radiates, shining like a constellation.
Melendez, i'm unimpressed, like constipation.
I dont give a ? , like a window pane, you see through.
I'm down right fierce like Hadoukens from Ryu.
aight fam decent ? -
last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/
he or she not feeling tis...obviously ? hating/
got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/
Only 1 thing better than beating this ? ....Its stacking papers/
A ? bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*
Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/
Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp
Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp
Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult
*Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*
Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here
? his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")
But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*
*Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that
He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it
Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it -
nice verse.you can change that line about me liking men tho since i changed it
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I'll be back to vote on this tomorrow!
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ItzGravitation had some clever lines spread throughout his verse form the window pane/haduken line to the opener. There were also pretty basic lines too like the murder inc/punt play line and the shogun/hot tongue line. C.Melendez only basic line to me was his opener set but after that, he went hard. Gotta say, C.Melendez verse kind of impressed me from the vapors/papers line to the Gravitation/satan line to the kat/that line and the closer. It was sick. Wack thing is, ItzGravitation's verse wasn't wack at all. Better than average IMO but C.Melendez caught fire. Best verse I've seen from him in awhile. Plus, most of C.Melendez's lines were battle oriented, meaning directed at ItzGravitation. Vote - C.Melendez
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C.Melendez wrote: »last battle I lost, 1st round with bad explanations/
he or she not feeling tis...obviously ? hating/-talk of past battles
got yall *snooping* around to peep the flow....slowly *catching vapors*/i dont get the asterisks
Only 1 thing better than beating this ? ....Its stacking papers/-called opponent a ?
A ? bound to *fall* tonight by my *theory* *Its Gravitation*-good wordplay
Grav got *wicked* rhymes but Melendez here....His matches *Satan*/nice line
Imma grab his face and, beat him to a pulp-good set up set up
Taste from the cup of defeat?....Nah Grav's taking a gulp- nice punchline
Heard the kids nice but not when compared to I the adult-nice-filler
*Lyrical Execution* taking place...Im compared to *Adolph*-filler but nice lines not attacking opponent though
Machete bleeding him here,walk away smoothly but leaving him here
? his funny lines ain't no comedians here (liking men line extra "funny")
But Keep *snicker*ing I got a gun *Kit* for *kat*-nice set up and wordplay
*Good bars* out of the rapper I stay kicking that -more braggin about your bars but not really attackin opponent
He's *butterfingers* with the Mic...he ain't firmly gripping it-
Milky smooth flow like Nestle during Crunchtime...check me spitting it
mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple -
I know I'm allowed to place a vote here but since I'm battling the winner of this match, I'm going to sit this one out.
Nice verses from the both of you.
See you next round. -
The match between C. Melendez and ItzGravitation was very interesting battle...they both different styles
Favorite lines from ItzGravitation- I kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play, the winner takes it all like that song by Abba
Farorite lines form C. Melendez- Lyrival Execution talking place I'm compared to Adolph Machete bleeding him here, walk away smoothly but leaving him here.
But my vote goes to C.Melendez because came with a stronger verse...but good luck to both battlers keep the good work. -
playing on the fact i lost last battle and yall would catch on to this battle.....Snoop Dogg song The Vaporsthedesolateone wrote: »mostly braggadocious material but really good wordplay my vote goes to itz gravitation because his verse was aimed more at the opponent even though it was simple -
ItzGravitation wrote: », I’m just saying like Goku
Am i the only one who caught this ?
i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku
that was a nice line.
Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.
Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo -
gravitation started off slow but picked it up after a while............i liked the muder inc, no ashanti ? and the i kick it all day like soccer you just a punt play.....the rest of it was okay
melendez had some nice wordplay, and a flow wit his but i gotta give it to...........
Gravitation -
deadpoolRKO wrote: »Am i the only one who caught this ?
i'm just Saying like Goku = I'm just SAYAIN like Goku
that was a nice line.
Melendez was nice with the wordplay , but My votes for ItzGravitation.
Overall i liked his verse better and it had more nice diss lines imo
that sayin ? went right over my head -
i enjoyed this battle, it was versatile with lot's of word play from both sides..
any more votes on this??
if so, I'm gonna have to vote for C.melendez because his word play was just sick, altho It'sgrav's verse was up to par too, but i felt like he was light weight on the punch lines, honestly i was expecting an all out battle lol. Idk why i had those expectations but eventually it came to surface. -
i'm done with these txt battles cuz you guys must judge by a different standard than the real world.
i dont even see this sick wordplay you guys speak of or these weak lines.
Who are you guys comparing me to, Lupe? -
it's text tho
not audio
so u have to visually show wordplay, which is much easier than verbally doing so
you mean much harder
Cuz i never lost a real rap battle.
I try and make it so that anyone reading my verse can find the rhythm.
but ? it. I know now -
both battlers did well
just saying like goku -
i think i went o hard for these dudes.
How you lost by line two
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