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Seriously: Eminem's 'Without Me" Is One Of The Best Displays Of Rap Skill... EVER

EkscapeEkscape Posts: 1,842
edited December 2011 in The Reason
On A Commercially Successful Level... I believe Em peaked musically around The Eminem Show/8 Mile Soundtrack and began falling off from the point on, he has never even been close lyrically as he was at that point as he is today. I know some say the song is corny and absolutely about nothing which is cool but The Word Play, Flow, Punchlines and most of all… The displaced of rhyme schemes/flow is one of the best ever; they way he approached the beat anyone that has every even tried to write a rap can only be astonished

've created a monster, 'cause nobody wants to
See Marshall no more they want Shady
I'm chopped liver
Well if you want Shady, then this is what I'll give ya
A little bit of weed mixed with some hard liquor
Some vodka that will jump start my heart quicker
Then a shot when I get shocked at the hospital
By the doctor when I'm not cooperating
When I'm rocking the table while he's operating "Hey"
You waited this long to stop debating
Cause I'm back, I'm on the rag and ovulating
I know you got a job Ms. Cheney
But your husband's heart problem is complicated
So the F-C-C won't let me be
Or let me be me so let me see
They tried to shut me down on M-T-V
But it feels so empty without me
So come on and dip, bum on your lips
fuck that, cum on your lips and some on your dick
And get ready 'cause this shit is about to get heavy
I just settled all my lawsuits, "FUCK you, Debbie!"

[Chorus]
Now this looks like a job for me
So everybody just follow me
'Cause we need a little controversy
'Cause it feels so empty without me
I said, this looks like a job for me
So everybody just follow me
'Cause we need a little controversy
'Cause it feels so empty without me

Little hellions kids feeling rebellious
Embarrassed, their parents still listen to Elvis
They start feeling like prisoners helpless
'Til someone comes along on a mission and yells "BITCH"
A visionary, vision is scary, could start a revolution
Pollutin' the air waves a rebel
So let me just revel and bask
In the fact that I got everyone kissing my ass
And it's a disaster such a catastrophe
For you to see so damn much of my ass you ask for me
Well I'm back, fix your bent antennae
Tune it in and then I'm gonna enter
Into the front of your skin like a splinter
The center of attention back for the winter
I'm interesting, the best thing since wrestling
Infesting in your kids ears and nesting
"Testing attention please"
Feel the tension soon as someone mentions me
Here's my ten cents, my two cents is free
A nuisance, who sent, you sent for me?


[Chorus]

A-tiskit a-taskit,
I go ass for tat with anybody who's talking this shit and that bitch
Chris Kirkpatrick, you can get your ass kicked
Worse than them little Limp Bizkit bastards
And Moby, you can get stomped by Obie
You thirty six year old bald headed fag, blow me
You don't know me, you're too old
Let it go its over, nobody listens to techno
Now lets go, just give me the signal
I'll be there with a whole list full of new insults
I've been dope, suspenseful with a pencil
Ever since Prince turned himself into a symbol
But sometimes this shit just seems
Everybody only wants to discuss me
So this must mean I'm disgusting
But it's just me I'm just obscene

Though I'm not the first king of controversy
I am the worst thing since Elvis Presley
To do black music so selfishly
And use it to get myself wealthy
"Hey" there's a concept that works
Twenty million other white rappers emerge
But no matter how many fish in the sea
It will be so empty without me

[Chorus]


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  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    Subject Matter wasn't good


    But a great Song
  • dalyricalbanditdalyricalbandit Co-Owner Of AllhipHop.com, Super Moderator, Administrator, Moderator Posts: 67,918 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    Wonderland wrote: »
    subject matter wasn't good


    but a great song

    didnt have emotion
  • KeepinItHundredKeepinItHundred Posts: 1,139 ✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    song was trash, don't care how nice he was rhyming.
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    didnt have emotion



    Well no Subject Matter/Content which is the most important factor in a Song


    The Beat was classic though
  • infamous114infamous114 Down in Miami where it's warm in the winter. Posts: 52,202 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    Song was wack, LMAO @ that beat being classic
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  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    The Song it self didn't fit The Eminem Show it was the only Comedy Song on the Album


    Where as every other Song was real Deep and Introspective
  • 5th Letter5th Letter Black Identified Extremist Posts: 37,068 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    The lyrics weren't heartfelt
    Fuck who's the baddest a persons status depends on salary
    That buck that bought that bottle could have struck the lotto
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    The Beat on the Song actually is amazing


    Of course it didn't have Subject Matter/Content and Lyrics with Substance but if you take it for what it is a Comedy Song with a really Catchy Hook and a really ill Beat then it is a great Song
  • bankrupt ballerbankrupt baller Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    But sometimes this shit just seems
    Everybody only wants to discuss me

    gee^^^^^^^lol
  • bankrupt ballerbankrupt baller Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    jamacia wrote: »
    The lyrics weren't heartfelt

    lol.....yo is shadyteam seriously a real poster or somebodies alias on here?
  • juan travoltajuan travolta Posts: 2,917 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    song sucks. typical eminem whiny bs.


  • 5th Letter5th Letter Black Identified Extremist Posts: 37,068 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    lol.....yo is shadyteam seriously a real poster or somebodies alias on here?

    She is real
    Fuck who's the baddest a persons status depends on salary
    That buck that bought that bottle could have struck the lotto
  • dalyricalbanditdalyricalbandit Co-Owner Of AllhipHop.com, Super Moderator, Administrator, Moderator Posts: 67,918 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    Lol at shady disliking the song but still finding a way to claim something about it was classic
  • bankrupt ballerbankrupt baller Posts: 12,927 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    jamacia wrote: »
    She is real

    lol....when everybody thinks you're a troll or an alias and you arent you're probably just really dumb
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    Young-Ice wrote: »
    eminem killed that shit

    definitely better than my name is and real slim shady


    That is cos of the Beat mainly
  • EsiamEsiam Posts: 1,533 ✭✭
    edited November 2011
    Honestly, this is probably the most annoying rap-song released as a single of all time

    Barbie Girl by Aqua is the most annoying song of all time but, yeah Em wins the rap-award for that shit
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    Lol at shady disliking the song but still finding a way to claim something about it was classic



    I dislike the Content in the Song and the Subject Matter i don't know anyone who likes the Subject Matter and Lyrics in that Song


    However the Beat was great and i loved the Hook
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    LAST 3 ALBUM Includings BAD MEETS EVIL BEEN LAME SINCE WHEN DOES EM HAVE R&b niggas on hes albums whack and the next d12 album better go in like devils night but fuck the new eminem real shit stans just wanna believe hes still ill the bet cypher was the hardest shit iv herd from him in a long time SNOW NIGGA NEEDS 2 BRING BACK THE SLIM SHADY IN HES MUSIC



    To be fair Eminem has had an RnB Singesr featuring on his very first Album on the Song If I Had and the RnB Singer featuring on Cum On Everybody


    Then there also the RnB Singer on Stan


    Then there was the RnB Singer featuring on Superman
  • Already Home_17Already Home_17 Posts: 14,572 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    Wonderland wrote: »
    Well no Subject Matter/Content which is the most important factor in a Song


    The Beat was classic though

    Wonderland wrote: »
    The Beat on the Song actually is amazing

    seriously, cut that shit out
  • StillFaggyAFStillFaggyAF Queer LGBT CommunityPosts: 40,358 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    Wonderland wrote: »
    I dislike the Content in the Song and the Subject Matter i don't know anyone who likes the Subject Matter and Lyrics in that Song


    However the Beat was great and i loved the Hook

    i guess wonderland is really a female then...

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  • dalyricalbanditdalyricalbandit Co-Owner Of AllhipHop.com, Super Moderator, Administrator, Moderator Posts: 67,918 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    Guess who back back again shadys back
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    There was also an RnB Singer featuring on the Song Love Me from The 8 Mile Soundtrack
  • alibabaalibaba Posts: 1,116 ✭✭✭✭
    edited November 2011
    song sucks. typical eminem whiny bs.

    .......................
  • WonderlandWonderland Posts: 1,377
    edited November 2011
    i guess wonderland is really a female then...



    Imagine how greater the Song would have been if it had the complete package of Subject Matter/Content that is all that was missing
  • CainCain The audacity of you fuck niggas Cyttorax DimensionPosts: 44,542 Regulator
    edited November 2011
    Emotional content was lacking no substance at all no good hook singing on top of that Em sucks.
    I mod without feelings or remorse.


    Just been through it all man
    Blood sweat and tears
    Niggaz is dead and shit
    What the fuck else can happen yo?
    I dont think much more son, word to mother yo
    We done seen it all, and been through it all yo
    Let y'all niggaz know right now
    Word to mother, for real, for real
    I aint ever goin back
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