Enigmatic Visions From The Abyss

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DB Cooper
DB Cooper Members Posts: 746
edited July 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Whats the maximum amount you can make on minimum wage?
enigmatic visions for days when i scripture the page
i see the girl of my dreams but she seems faceless
if ? is love than i'm an atheist
after the smoke clears its not over until i provoke tears
quotes for years drink cigarettes and smoke beers
i'm above the clouds still below the heavens
only definition i could think is purgatory
another realm where flesh and bones have no authority
below me the definition of hell
a messy place bring your wet naps
where angels graduated from wings to jet packs
you cant see from the TV
get cancer from food and cell phones
everyone requires hearing aids from the ipod headphones
people pay for inhalants that cause diseases
people blindly follow a man they never met named jesus
I take a step towards you fall in a colorless abyss
void of happiness and bliss
bountiful knowledge but overshadowed by ignorance
my course syllabus requires persistence and diligence
vigilante justice from a hero less cyst
which is society
living is the longest form of suicide and i am dying see?
if i make it to heaven then my residence is hell
and it mirrors the abyss in which i just fell


all over the place i know just ? around tho
thoughts?

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
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    this was thee bomb!

    Yo, I'm really diggin this jawn.. The word play..

    You should post here more often, we got spectators that be reading and you got people like me that usually reads about mostly everyones jawns and gives em feedback regardless of the nature..


    Thanks for sharing!
  • DB Cooper
    DB Cooper Members Posts: 746
    edited July 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    this was thee bomb!

    Yo, I'm really diggin this jawn.. The word play..

    You should post here more often, we got spectators that be reading and you got people like me that usually reads about mostly everyones jawns and gives em feedback regardless of the nature..


    Thanks for sharing!
    props on comments
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited July 2010
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    DB Cooper wrote: »
    props on comments

    No problem..