can you guys rate my freestyle i need good feedback on how good i am
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killarenzo
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http://youtu.be/-Yp6A65d_9MComments
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Never interfere of intertwin.
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thx for the feedback plap
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+1 for coming off the top for the most part
-3 for not making a porpoise reference -
did you tell the hype man to shut up.......? was like uhhh huh uhhh, and my dude was like "hol up hol up let me finish stop that ? let me finish".....lmfao........thats gone be a new hook........."let me switch my flow up hol up hol up wait I aint Biggie"
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+1 for the second time i heard "zoinks!" used in a rap.
-10 for turning the ? camera sideways. if your name isn't O-Dog you should be using the proper orientation of your phone to record videos. -
thx for the feedback
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-2 for claiming you said it thrice when in reality you only said it twice. That aint keepin it real
-6 for drinking water in a frat house. BEER ONLY ARGH ARGH ARGH
+3 for having what may be a sea shell sitting off to the side. I like the beach. Make a conch shell horn sound your trademark intro -
thx but that aint a frat house thats my room fam lol
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wack
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Naw u cant really rap
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if Aquina says you're wack i gotta ride with the BOSS
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? was turrible yo. I can't focks with that.
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Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens.
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i jus started writing songs thts a freestyle
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thx for the feedback
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p-tavern wrote:Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens.
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^p-tavern wrote:Battle Aquafina on tinychat. No pre-writtens. -
Lmaaaaooo yall tryna embarass this boy!
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aquinafina wrote:Lmaaaaooo yall tryna embarass this boy!
The people have spoken Aquina...let's get it poppin!! <:-P -
Lmaaaaooooooo sdookie gtfoh!
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smh @ sboogie! Why so serious??
So when is this battle going to go down?! This place is dead as a door ? ...lol. -
you just doing this for fun right? u not tryna make a career as a rapper?
