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The singing was way off but the rapping was good and on point -
These two tracks are solid yo. I like the way you rode the beat on these sounds like you're reading on some parts but the lyrics were nice. The 2nd one was tight from the beat to the second verse, I was diggin' the way you tied the story into the stranger theme.
I've been wanting to drop some ? in here for a while but it's been a minute since I've been in the booth, I'm just getting back on it. I guess I'll link these two tracks I dropped about six years ago (told y'all it's been a minute lol).
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Lol I can't sing, and I want gonna wait to find a singer either
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Cigarello Slim wrote: »
These two tracks are solid yo. I like the way you rode the beat on these sounds like you're reading on some parts but the lyrics were nice. The 2nd one was tight from the beat to the second verse, I was diggin' the way you tied the story into the stranger theme.
I've been wanting to drop some ? in here for a while but it's been a minute since I've been in the booth, I'm just getting back on it. I guess I'll link these two tracks I dropped about six years ago (told y'all it's been a minute lol).
I don't think I could go at my mom's on a track. U expected more of a bk sound from you tho I gotta hear more to see if I could listen to a whole mixtape -
@_menace_ you need to let me mule kick that second track for you
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Lol I can't sing, and I want gonna wait to find a singer either
You'll get better just try to find some inspiration and find your voice listen to some good singers to get a idea.
I recommend only if you're actually serious about it
Frank Sinatra (THE GOAT)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yreYIs3JWoQ
Dino from HTOWN. (dudes voice is crazy af and sounds better live imo)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2fhYGZQNwyM
Nate Dogg (especially if you wanna sing your hooks since he was the greatest at it.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bYrmop7g2cU
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Cigarello Slim wrote: »
These two tracks are solid yo. I like the way you rode the beat on these sounds like you're reading on some parts but the lyrics were nice. The 2nd one was tight from the beat to the second verse, I was diggin' the way you tied the story into the stranger theme.
I've been wanting to drop some ? in here for a while but it's been a minute since I've been in the booth, I'm just getting back on it. I guess I'll link these two tracks I dropped about six years ago (told y'all it's been a minute lol).
I ? with these tracks.
FTW reminds of some gutter NYC ? the lyrics were on point and the hook was dope.
More than a hustler was dope I liked the way you were riding the beat.
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Cigarello Slim wrote: »
These two tracks are solid yo. I like the way you rode the beat on these sounds like you're reading on some parts but the lyrics were nice. The 2nd one was tight from the beat to the second verse, I was diggin' the way you tied the story into the stranger theme.
I've been wanting to drop some ? in here for a while but it's been a minute since I've been in the booth, I'm just getting back on it. I guess I'll link these two tracks I dropped about six years ago (told y'all it's been a minute lol).
I don't think I could go at my mom's on a track. U expected more of a bk sound from you tho I gotta hear more to see if I could listen to a whole mixtape
Yeah man I was reckless at the time, but good looks on the listen.
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Lol meaning I wanna get on the track lol -
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got damn ? just skipped over reviewin my ? lol, i had to take a song down anyway tho from my original post in here
heres 2 of my favs from my last mixtape, and my remix of Control
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3-iMErcN44
http://youtu.be/oKivMbihtPY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gda8kv41gF0&feature=share&list=UUo9AthOm8cOFX2-6BrJBtuw -
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Peezy_Jenkins wrote: »got damn ? just skipped over reviewin my ? lol, i had to take a song down anyway tho from my original post in here
heres 2 of my favs from my last mixtape, and my remix of Controlhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3-iMErcN44http://youtu.be/oKivMbihtPYhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gda8kv41gF0&feature=share&list=UUo9AthOm8cOFX2-6BrJBtuw
End of Story was dope. I'm all Control'd out so I didnt vibe as hard with the Control remix but you was spitting on that jawn.
Can someone embed Soundcloud music?
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TrueGodHS I'm listening to you,now . The songs are really dope and fresh. They are mixed really well. You def have a place in hiphop.
I really think that piece of me is beautiful. I can feel your lyrics in this one. It paints a really good picture.
American Ghetto is really a dark romp through the ghetto, in the 90s(?). I def feel this one 100%. I also like the gil scot sample. Dope stuff for sure.
Zuri's song is cool. It's a really dope sound and it also is very descriptive. A lot of new school cats try to be descriptive, but it comes off as fake or forced. This seems honest and sincere
Your lyrics are reflective and deep. Your beats are classic yet new sounding. I'm defiantly going to follow you on soundcloud.
here's my new song. It's a trap beat, but it's not to be rapped over, just listened to/mixed with other instrumental. Think of it as dubstep meets rap beats.
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Checked out that Surgery from Drogo, I'm feeling the beats, checking out Eyerone right now. New track here off Soul Revival 2 as well
Eyerone- That One Time joint is going hard. I ? with it. The beat for Debt is my type of ? right there homie. ? with that and the 7Five too. You got some dope ass ? man. -
True ? , I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.
It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics -
Checked out that Surgery from Drogo, I'm feeling the beats, checking out Eyerone right now. New track here off Soul Revival 2 as well
Eyerone- That One Time joint is going hard. I ? with it. The beat for Debt is my type of ? right there homie. ? with that and the 7Five too. You got some dope ass ? man.
That "Authenic" joint is dope, nice beat, thoughtful lyrics and a steady flow. Good ? .
Here goes a freestyle I did while playing Xbox with the homies.
"The Execution Freestyle"
Looking for feedback, 'preciate it.
Excuse the quality we were ? and high out of our mind. -
True ? , I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.
It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics
I have a varied flow, but my albums tend to be on some storytelling ? , which is why it's like that. I can do a fast flow like Bone Thugs and Twista, but honestly? It just never fits for the cohesiveness of my album to be real. Mixtapes I've done it on though.
Checking out the Execution freestyle now and the Hands Off joint.
The Hands off joint lyrically was on point.
The Execution joint was lyrically on point, the sound quality of course was off, but I'm sure when you get back on that ? , you gon be good
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True ? , I love "piece of me." takes soul to rap truths about your kids. I think you could improve a bit by varying up your flow, speedin it up early in the song, before slowin back down, or speedin up the chorus, or somethin.
It's dope though, and you do speed up after the hook. How fast can you get? showcasing multiple different speeds could get peoples' attention. keep up the good work!
http://rapgenius.com/Scorpio-hands-off-syria-anti-war-protest-rap-live-on-september-11-2013-lyrics
The lyrics on this one were thought provoking but the delivery killed it for me it's all over the place, the violin was a nice touch though.
This track I'm posting is not from me but my brother from another mother Hannibal King off of his upcoming project "Floral Print"
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Cigarillo Slim I'm ? with your brothers lyrics could work on the flow tho but lyrics are dope
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqEhPJMILJA
This right here is my new video first one I've ever made "Cruise & loh - Cream" check the mixtape out as well on Datpiff under "The Debut"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I92tNm89uFM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHe209Y3KJY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XzF6y7WpHD8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7DzlACsCU8
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