I Want You by Lex!

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Lex!
Lex! Members Posts: 273
edited November 2010 in Waiting To Exhale




Yeah I WANT YOU!!!
but are you good for me?
i mean these fiends want drugs.
look what you do to me
i was confused you see
i put on all this jewerly
you dump me for a new man damn!
what a bufoon you see
you got me feeling muthafuckin stupid
cuz you were so Ruthless!
and i was so Clueless!
...they say love is blind
but i got blindfolded and shot in the heart this time damn!
the pain i couldnt bare it
what was worst was getting the one who broke my heart to repair it
i mean ? ...talk about beating a dead horse
for letting a ? go that was your loss
baby the cost...of love is...
so priceless
so pure so righteous
fall in love dont fight this
no swings
am letting go of all things
no puppets in this love game baby
no strings

#Swervy

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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited November 2010
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    The last 8 stanzas I like! Reasonates well with me..

    Over all, this was a nice drop, but I kinda wish you went further in expressing the emotions there.. It was getting there then you kinda held back it seems like..

    But as long as you have expressed what needed to be express!

    Thanks for sharing and keep dropping em'

    Peace.
  • Lex!
    Lex! Members Posts: 273
    edited November 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    The last 8 stanzas I like! Reasonates well with me..

    Over all, this was a nice drop, but I kinda wish you went further in expressing the emotions there.. It was getting there then you kinda held back it seems like..

    But as long as you have expressed what needed to be express!

    Thanks for sharing and keep dropping em'




    Peace.

    thanks for the feedback and i will
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited November 2010
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    Lex! wrote: »
    thanks for the feedback and i will

    No doubt. I'll look forward to your drops!