Lost in Braille-Open Love Letter

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REAL_POETICAL
REAL_POETICAL Members Posts: 347 ✭✭
edited August 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
Smart mouth shenanigans
causing drama
who knew the fellow fella
following the silly dumb desperate
would fall victim to circumstance
and humility
reality sets in from false tales
giving out speeches about WE WILL PREVAIL
taking the country back and attacking black hand comments
across the face
without a trace of remorse
a curse you become and a cancer shall succumb
your eyes for they see false glimpses
redemption is coming and words are running thin
losing your ratings and the soul within
repenting but at the same time redoing the same subject
calling officials Nazis and battling equality
just for the sake of your own salary
let the fires of hell devour thee
or show your spirit the end of morality
to endure life legion of doom
eternally burning from tomb to reincarnated ?
nothing shall be victorious of you
people wants your head on a stake
but settle for blind visions that occurs of you
so prepare to guide the people you uplift
to the end of the road at the tip of the cliff

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  • blackphysics
    blackphysics Members Posts: 91 ✭✭
    edited July 2010
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    * Snapping fingers poet style*

    Good ? man,

    "So prepare to guide the people you lift
    to the end of the road at the tip of the cliff"

    Good way to end it .

    Keep it up
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Like physics mention, the last lines left me in awes.. Good stuff like slays real p..

    * tupacfan continues snapping fingers poet style :-D