INSTRUMENTAL KEYSTYLE-Late Night Rendezvous Version *beat is Ghostface-wildflower

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VSOP
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edited August 2010 in Body SLAM
first 20 seconds of this instrumental should tell you the theme of tonights Keystyle-interpret how you want it and ride with it


we gettin Ol ? with it on a Ghostface beat

change the ? 's to tt's
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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    bobbs head...


    roll this phatty like cuban cigar
    lit this one more time for the all the falls
    taking me back like high school when i use to sit in the rest room stalls
    poppin a few breath mints called halls
    ditching class and jacking from cheap malls
    signing clauses that had no clause
    yea its just me up in this jawn
    with faces like yawns
    and making teachers frown
    highschool homecoming i said ? thee crown
    got chased by kats like hounds
    left them with astounds
    yea it's nita acting a clown
    a beast unleashed like a pit in your lawn
    better keep your braods in line
    or imma bust with the quickness all the way down
    high as ? like cloud nine
    ? all ya gats even your tech n9nes
    even the books you've studied of Albert Eninstein
    ? is filled with clandestine
    give me back of what was mine
    see im losing my mind
    I just lost my moms
    sick of these baby rhymes
    and all these ticket of speed fines
    now lemme just chill and sip on this pissy ass wine
    while my day unwinds
    ? it hit this track one more time on rewind....



    Grammar is all over the place but f it.. i spoke at the top the of my mind hehehe.. love this instrumental tho.. ghostface my fav outta all the wu kats..
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    bobbs head...


    roll this phatty like cuban cigar
    lit this one more time for the all the falls
    taking me back like high school when i use to sit in the rest room stalls
    poppin a few breath mints called halls
    ditching class and jacking from cheap malls
    signing clauses that had no clause
    yea its just me up in this jawn
    with faces like yawns
    and making teachers frown
    highschool homecoming i said ? thee crown
    got chased by kats like hounds
    left them with astounds
    yea it's nita acting a clown
    a beast unleashed like a pit in your lawn
    better keep your braods in line
    or imma bust with the quickness all the way down
    high as ? like cloud nine
    ? all ya gats even your tech n9nes
    even the books you've studied of Albert Eninstein
    ? is filled with clandestine
    give me back of what was mine
    see im losing my mind
    I just lost my moms
    sick of these baby rhymes
    and all these ticket of speed fines
    now lemme just chill and sip on this pissy ass wine
    while my day unwinds
    ? it hit this track one more time on rewind....



    Grammar is all over the place but f it.. i spoke at the top the of my mind hehehe.. love this instrumental tho.. ghostface my fav outta all the wu kats..

    lol f' the grammar lol this one was for you, thas why i let it be and didnt write somethin to it yet-once that instrumental hit the ipod playlist-i had to up it on here

    ill write somethin to this later but good read---hmmmm what to write what to write!!?!??
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    VSOP wrote: »
    lol f' the grammar lol this one was for you, thas why i let it be and didnt write somethin to it yet-once that instrumental hit the ipod playlist-i had to up it on here

    ill write somethin to this later but good read---hmmmm what to write what to write!!?!??

    lol, thanks I take that as an honor hahahaha.. yea the instrument was crazy, I was feeling it and just started typing whatever came to mind with the concept of HS, because I use to listen to the Wu hard back in HS, had the backpack tagged up with the W, ahhh those were the days..


    Now hurry up and write something LOL.. Don't hold back!
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    lol, thanks I take that as an honor hahahaha.. yea the instrument was crazy, I was feeling it and just started typing whatever came to mind with the concept of HS, because I use to listen to the Wu hard back in HS, had the backpack tagged up with the W, ahhh those were the days..


    Now hurry up and write something LOL.. Don't hold back!

    hard as ? to write over a ghost song where I know all the words lol but I tried

    a lil long

    she froze
    when he came home
    I was stoned
    but I didn't let her know
    that I heard his hand shaking when he was tryin to put the key in the door
    that ? makes me laugh
    cracks my ass up
    peoples intuitions comin to fruition
    and runs backswards over their happiness like a Mack truck

    but let me back up
    rewind to the beginning of the night
    when I picked her ass up
    slammed her against the cabinet
    lifted her skirt
    got passionate with golden wrappers
    fire and Ice
    my cold soul enters her hot and sticky situation
    while calamity cries
    her eyes roll backwards as i'm squeezin her hips and yankin her forward
    the camera rolls
    while I hit her faster after I rip her panties off and throw em to the floor
    shes screamin in Spanglish
    "DADDY, PAPI, OH MY ? HE'S ? ...OH MY!"
    i hit it like her man didn't
    she fantasm's and crams her nails in my back
    it hurts but turns me on
    so I grab pick her up, turn her around
    throw her against the wall
    she can scream
    I'll hold her hands down
    and give her every inch
    All of me
    my freaky lil girl
    her legs are gettin weak
    her voice is goin hoarse
    I was takin freaky pictures with her phone
    of her smilin and cryin in pain
    screamin "do it again, mas duro!"
    I tried switchin from pictures to video
    must of called her man on speed dial
    who knows

    he was prolly lookin at his phone like
    "oh My boo's callin"
    pickin up like "hey babe"
    hears her screamin like shes gettin ?
    hears her screamin "? me harder" like shes gettin paid

    jumps in his chrysler
    yellin at the top of lungs
    "SOMEBODY IS ? MY GIRL!!!"
    thinks hes gonna get brave
    sneak in the house
    and do his favorite impression of "I AM HURT"

    while we're on round five
    dumb high
    smokin on some fine purp
    she got me hard
    suckin til my pipe burst

    right then
    he ran in
    face confused but lookin at the both of us like
    I hate you

    he came just in time
    right when I came and gave her a ?

    grabbed my kangol
    walked right past this fool
    straight back into the elevator where I met his girl
    bout to hit the lobby bar
    get a drink and grab some food
    until I see her man stormin through
    then I'll go back up to her room
    and do a
    ? DAMN ME pt 2
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited August 2010
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    Damn Ms. Pac had me rewinded back to HS days, VSOP love the imagery of the story, read a few lines and close your eyes and you can play the movie... I need to drop something aint blessed this place for a few weeks
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Aye vsop,

    Your drop reminded me of R.Kelly closet LOL. Was well written with images too! I Like that.. you need to work on part 2 now hehe.


    Chozen,

    So I took you back to HS huh, haha, glad I could do that.. This track took me back and had to express it.. And its been long over due since you blessed us with one of your drops, your stuff be on point too! Now drop something!
  • ThaChozenWun
    ThaChozenWun Members Posts: 9,390
    edited August 2010
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    To all my guy friends I probably ? your chick first
    They deceiving I couldn't fight it, the body makes the ? worst
    Back in 10th grade ? this ? named Keysha
    loud mouth hoe, smashin for the very same reasons
    Shorty had that porn star body, smile of a waitress
    mad cool and her style was gracious
    She knew it was bomb, 1 second leave, later I pop up
    ? too wet I had to break her off proper
    her clothes droppin, the minute that she smell the cologne
    Aint even have to gas her up just to get her alone
    and after its all over she let a ? glitter her dome
    Just the thought of me would get her to moan
    She was grimey two main guys, I was the side show
    They aint never hit it, baby girl could cook up a lie though
    Cold hearted when she fly bro the whole sky froze
    Them two ? never knew I'd know
    Matter fact they was two 5-0s
    She was in deep with two pigs who couldn't follow her tracks
    Follow her to the crib but couldn't follow her back
    Shorty posed with my ? like she was modelin that
    suck a golf ball through a straw and then swallow it back
    Never feelins, baby knew it was nothing but ?
    the two pigs though, she aint know they nothin but lovers
    She thinkin they love her but they was lovin each other
    The last time I came quick kicked the ? to the curb
    Old ? was set in stone, it was written in word
    She talkin she got a real man this chickens absurd
    I told her once that ? for the birds
    You dumb ? , went home and caught her man in the crib
    down low ? the other man on his lid
    Keysha gettin worked up, her whole world crumblin
    cause never in a thousand years she think he was ? him
    And after all ? you wasn't even lovin him
    you came to my crib every week and brought the rubbers in
    So I hit, they in love, guess for us thats another win
    If Karma is a ? then I love it then
    What goes around comes around, ? you wanna ? around
    Your whole life will crumble down and the sun will frown
    The moon will start laughin, the stars are hysterical
    You dead to the world ? create the cards for your burial





    Not my best, but Its the first anything I wrote in a while my sons keepin me up too damn much.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Chozen,

    You came thru very well, but I'm so use to hearing your rhyme scheme and word play and I have to keep it hunnid and agree, it wasn't your best but you gave us a vivid image, the last few stanzas was nice tho... The moon laughs and the stars are hysterical, I was diggin those lines..

    overall nice drop! I look forward to hearing your next piece!
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    bobbs head...


    roll this phatty like cuban cigar

    roll this phatty like the index paper in the Bible
    didn't wanna smoke any of the writing
    kept tryin to use the empty pages and I couldn't
    until I got to Genesis and then their was light
    there was fire
    this beat reminds me of that first time I smoked
    me and my dogs
    that first time we skipped school and robbed cumberland farms
    bought and opened a chips bag then threw in the cards
    baseball, basketball and football
    some gum, some blow pops
    the thrill was crazy
    we went out back to seperate it and the cops came
    red and blue flashing lights
    we dropped the loot and flew
    dodgin the cops runnin down the back canal to my house

    I think this beat was playin then
    when we would stay up in the AM
    drinkin Olde English
    freestylin on the porch
    but too ? to talk

    This beat reminds me of manually havin to rewind the tape
    to hear a song I taped one day
    after I called into the DJ
    requested a song and waited for 78 minutes until it played
    then pressed play and record
    hopin to press stop before the commercials came on
    bobbin my head the whole time
    hopin the tape wouldnt run outta room
    cuz I been at this since noon
    and I'm gonna hafta flip it soon
    but HOPEFULLY I can do it after this tune

    this beat reminds me taggin the bathroom walls with a W
    like I wasn't the only at this dumb christian school that listened to the Wu
    damn I'm gonna be in trouble soon
    but ? it I'm through
    gonna get suspended for 8
    chill at home, read the Bible and smoke a J
    damn this beat reminds me of those good ol days
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited August 2010
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    Aye VSOP,

    That ? was fiyah! The first 5 lines was just ahhh.. Love it..no disrespect to the bible but I admit I used the back of the index as rolling papers, then the white pages ran out and started using the actual writings of the bible smh.. Those were the days when I could barely make a dolla.. ? took me back.. Thank you! And the entire read was up to par!
  • VSOP
    VSOP Members Posts: 195 ✭✭
    edited August 2010
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    tupacfan wrote: »
    Aye VSOP,

    That ? was fiyah! The first 5 lines was just ahhh.. Love it..no disrespect to the bible but I admit I used the back of the index as rolling papers, then the white pages ran out and started using the actual writings of the bible smh.. Those were the days when I could barely make a dolla.. ? took me back.. Thank you! And the entire read was up to par!

    lol you n me both did it

    my first j was rolled in bible papers

    i fell off after that line huh? lol
  • Tupacfan
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    edited August 2010
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    VSOP wrote: »
    lol you n me both did it

    my first j was rolled in bible papers

    i fell off after that line huh? lol

    haha, na VSOP..

    This was a hawt peice all the way around.. the lines that stood out to me the most and was like digging way more than 100% was these..

    roll this phatty like the index paper in the Bible
    didn't wanna smoke any of the writing
    kept tryin to use the empty pages and I couldn't
    until I got to Genesis and then their was light
    there was fire
    this beat reminds me of that first time I smoked
    me and my dogs

    that was very relatable...


    and this right here took me back to memory lane with me and baby bro, when we was younging, we be ? as hell, tryna freestyle with all the homies, and just straight ? up, not making no sense hahaha..

    I think this beat was playin then
    when we would stay up in the AM
    drinkin Olde English
    freestylin on the porch
    but too ? to talk



    Over all it was good ? , the rhyme scheme was on point..

    and this beat is just nuts! I love it.. thanks for posting it for us to write to and allowing me to be all over the place with my grammar lol.

    I