Last Mass by Techn0tic.

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Techn0tic
Techn0tic Members Posts: 30
edited January 2010 in Waiting To Exhale
First lyrics I've written in a while. Comments appreciated.
I'm the monster of your dreams
Nothing is what it seems
Run through and viciously slash up your cheeks
For then it starts to bleed
Blood fills the streets
And you get brutally murdered by a zombie fleet
I've never been scared to bust a gun
This nightmare has finally begun
And I'm going to gruesomely blacken the sun
All you can do is start to run
Only to fail because the damage is done
All because I am the chosen one
The undead apocalypse has won
Bring forth the end of this nation
Cardiopulmonary resuscitation
Hell is your next destination
So don't try and deny this transformation
'Cuz you won't make it
You can't fake it to get faked
Like you were Clay Aiken
The closet door is locked and you can't break it
So when your mind is aching
Remember your daughter's wake
The way your hand would shake
With the steak knife clenched to take
Away your one foolish mistake
Never let the memory break
For now you decsend to hell
To eternally dwell among those bells
So make your fairwells, Miguel
Step out of your cell
And welcome yourself to the Devil's motel
The stench of your corpse corrodes the earth
Child birth in ? dirt
A captivating moment of my work
Going beserk with an evil smirk
While your blood squirts
Rotting organs my dessert
Now divert your attention
To my one and only intention
To put fear in the third dimension
All the children sentenced to detention
Creating a large amount of tension
But you will soon be dead
The moment the world dreads
Your head bled, oozing red
While one billion bodies taste lead
I'm just a murderous psychopath
Created to unleash a bloodbath
? fear my wrath
Follow the ? path
And walk into your last mass

Comments

  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2010
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    DAM,

    This is just ill all the way around.

    Bravo!

    I love the rhyme scheme yo!

    This is like my favorite piece up in here right now.. I mean you killed it, each line for line keeps getting better and better.

    Thanks for sharing, i appreciate this very much. Keep droppin em' too.
  • Techn0tic
    Techn0tic Members Posts: 30
    edited January 2010
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    Thanks fam, means a lot, for real. I'll definitely keep dropping them.
  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited January 2010
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    Techn0tic wrote: »
    Thanks fam, means a lot, for real. I'll definitely keep dropping them.

    No doubt!

    as writers we could def use feedback and the support as well. I'll be checkin for ur drops, their's substances to this peice so I look forward to the other peices.