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shawty_stunnagrl
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Time doesnt pass
It sits still and waits
I stand here in the moment
Blank minded in awe
I stare straight ahead
I see only the open road
Vast emptiness
Consumes my soul
Total control of my being
Is lost
A glimpse of what was
Shatters the silence of death
Eyes of the weak open
With gasps im reminded to breathe.
....yea i use to be on here a while back. old sn was "stunnashadesgrl" ...some of yall might remember me. but im reposting this poem to get started back up again.
It sits still and waits
I stand here in the moment
Blank minded in awe
I stare straight ahead
I see only the open road
Vast emptiness
Consumes my soul
Total control of my being
Is lost
A glimpse of what was
Shatters the silence of death
Eyes of the weak open
With gasps im reminded to breathe.
....yea i use to be on here a while back. old sn was "stunnashadesgrl" ...some of yall might remember me. but im reposting this poem to get started back up again.
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I never recognized you here, but welcome back!
I thought this was an interesting topic, I wish you had done more with it, in terms of stretching the poem some more because it was like a hiku..
I enjoyed reading tho, anything poetic I enjoy reading regardless the lack of substance..
neways keep writing..
Peace! -
haha yea its been a while since ive been here. and thanx. this poem won me alot. i just never responded intime to the stuff or it would have been published too.
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O yea, that's wassup..
I'll be looking forward to your presence here..
O, and ur welcome for the feedback too!