My first rap song
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ZuluZombie
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This is a rough recording, first take and stuff. This is a hobby of mine so please give it a listen any feedback would be appreciated. thank you for listening 
http://listn.to/ZuLumusic
http://listn.to/ZuLumusic
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g7bmh3SwWzQComments
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can i atleast get a "you suck kid!" ???
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you ? suck niggga ? !
lol sike nah, you need more energy you sound dead otherwise decent. -
...sucksss and the nerve of the shout outs at the end -
your flow needs a lot of work. lyrically you are decent.
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yall ? up.
anyways bro u got potential. just work on
flow
delivery
and you need more energy -
You have talent but seriously you talkin some ? on those bars. Maybe I didn't get the message you were trying to put across. Show the world who you are and what you got. You're flow and delivery will improve with practice of your lyrics but who cares if your flow is ill if your lyrics are ? ? Answer; Modern day Eminem fans
Raekwon "Yo anybody can rhyme... but it's what you saying that makes a person know about you... know the type of person you is."
Happiness is just a state of mind so make yourself happy. Keep spittin and big love to the hip hop nation. -
ZuluZombie wrote: »can i atleast get a "you suck kid!" ???
Yo man,
real talk.. Your lyrics are nice.. Sometimes you try to say too much and it sounds like you cram it in. This just means you need to work on your speed a little bit. You need to work on your delivery as well. Look into breathing technics and what not.. For real, you gpt skills but if you were killin the delivery and not missn a beat and had some compression on it (sounds like youa re using a dynamic mic dude, a condenser is not that0 much) then the song would be the ? ..
All in all you got skills so mad props. Just keep at it.
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yeah, just keep doin what you do. it's listenable right now, and you can tell you got skills.
