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jonlakadeadmic
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I'm not that great at rapping but like most people I tend to write from time to time.
I'll post the best verse I ever wrote (which isn't THAT good) and ya'll can do the same.
Ya'll know you want people to see your best ? ever that you got in the vault....post it.
I'm the illest ? rapper
that no ones ever hearda
I rep Dead Mic on the track, straight murda
I'm only spittin heat like I was carryin a burna
I'd coach you how to flow,
but I dont deal with slow learners
I wanna be on forbes list with the top earners
my tables havent turn yet
so that im concerned with
Im on my David Stern ?
I dont play I own this
I'll never lose focus
I ball and i'm cultured
I'm stoned hittin roaches to deal with my emotions
so mix up the potions and pick the most potent
im dope and ferocious
im deep like the oceans but still go unnoticed
i feel like i've been carryin boulders on my shoulders
and as ive gottan older
my flows gotten colder
so much i have you froze up
so keep your muthafuckin toes up
go against us and get your throat closed up (what)
I'll post the best verse I ever wrote (which isn't THAT good) and ya'll can do the same.
Ya'll know you want people to see your best ? ever that you got in the vault....post it.
I'm the illest ? rapper
that no ones ever hearda
I rep Dead Mic on the track, straight murda
I'm only spittin heat like I was carryin a burna
I'd coach you how to flow,
but I dont deal with slow learners
I wanna be on forbes list with the top earners
my tables havent turn yet
so that im concerned with
Im on my David Stern ?
I dont play I own this
I'll never lose focus
I ball and i'm cultured
I'm stoned hittin roaches to deal with my emotions
so mix up the potions and pick the most potent
im dope and ferocious
im deep like the oceans but still go unnoticed
i feel like i've been carryin boulders on my shoulders
and as ive gottan older
my flows gotten colder
so much i have you froze up
so keep your muthafuckin toes up
go against us and get your throat closed up (what)
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damn that ? was wack !thats your best?
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thedesolateone wrote: »damn that ? was wack !thats your best?
lol............. -
im the illest emcee not in the industry
if they cant put an end to me they wanna censore me
givin headshots on the mic strait kennedies
may hit your face with a book
for invading my space forget befriending me
i only twitter ? with twin sisters
and still dont love em even when im rigid
get only my ? in a bow forget christmas
cold on them like whoreson
oldschool like the old forums
aint gotta battle no one
these rappers i snore on them
wake when they finished lock the door on them then gorge on them
my coming is dreaded like cool runnings
rappers get ate so much i need two stomachs -
i floe like blood work on domes/makin many feelin mini they steppin stones and gnomes/
so let it ride/ dont interupt/dollas outa you its a diamond deep in da rough/ so you hush/
been tryin for too long/ huslte outa here you always caught by the law/we steppin in the west and in cali they keep a vest/
but pour it in the north the mental insane rest/ its head glued maybe its not you/ a foggy cloudy lake wit swamp eels a goo/
its great gates wit long barz of hate/ im lookin through the window im goin no hesitate/ yo key is in the handle wont even bend/
i came into this world to comfort a bring kin/ an improvise neva a big surprise/ill listen to yo sermon bout walkin wit blinded eyes/
no lie lie beautiful swag and jive/ an essence to the floe that wonders and moves eyes/ so let it ride/mastermind grind higha power from a women the shackels is bouta slide/
so come and take a trip wit me/sticker thorns is torn wit blood stains on my feet/knee deep im leo out on these streeets/ its a bandit on the lose and im runnin wit
muddy feet. -
Even tho my career is in its infancy/ I still spit wit great consistency/ JEFF AXEL also rhymes with great symphony/ These wack ass rappers JEFF AXEL is killin/ My lyrics will put you on ya ass like an overdose on penecillin/Comin at me wrong that ? is tragic/In the future I'll be a star and you'll be askin for paper or plastic/ JEFF AXEL the throwed off warrior/ My click will leave fans in euphoria/ JEFF AXEL the black man I'm underestimated/ A majority of these ? in the rap game is overrated/ JEFF AXEL will leave these other rappers decimated/ JEFF AXEL's style is sicker then hepatitis/ JEFF AXEL the black man will leave his fans excited/ People love JEFF AXEL's verbal Illustration/ My style has creativity and stimulation- JEFF AXEL is back 3rd verse
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thedesolateone wrote: »damn that ? was wack !thats your best?
yes. i told you i wasnt good I AINT MADE FOR RAPPIN, DAME DASH STATUS
just wanted to see some verses -
They call me Doogie Howser
the way I house the doogies
I get tv money b
right next to doogie's goonies
boobie louie
rootie tootie
fresh and fruity
put on the purple louie
because I'm like fresh noogies -
They call me Doogie Howser
the way I house the doogies
I get tv money b
right next to doogie's goonies
boobie louie
rootie tootie
fresh and fruity
put on the purple louie
because I'm like fresh noogies
the hamburger is back! -
jonlakadeadmic wrote: »yes. i told you i wasnt good I AINT MADE FOR RAPPIN, DAME DASH STATUS
just wanted to see some verses
oh ok .your verse wasnt that bad there was alot of good rhymin
and a few nice lines -
thedesolateone wrote: »oh ok .your verse wasnt that bad there was alot of good rhymin
and a few nice lines
? shut ya trap -
? shut ya trap
still mad i roasted you so bad you had to change your name to dwade?
you still a lame no matter what moniker you go by
it just the top layer you still who you were before you got here
dwade/the hamburger gets slayed at every change of name
get smoked like a roach no need for raid
cant do what i can ambidextrous poppin ambiens
writing with my left hand when it tires i just switch hands
still he has stayed a ? off stan
who probably writes his verses with crayons
you prayed while i preyed and answered your prayers
all he does now is troll the ether burned his soul
till he dont even wanna battle anymore
when i lace him he get wasted more than whiteboys
when i deploy these bars like missiles he is destroyed
just an undercover ? like metroid without the cool toys
little boy in corduroys cant even annoy
you are null and void -
thedesolateone wrote: »still mad i roasted you so bad you had to change your name to dwade?
you still a lame no matter what moniker you go by
it just the top layer you still who you were before you got here
dwade/the hamburger gets slayed at every change of name
get smoked like a roach no need for raid
cant do what i can i write with both hands
still he has stayed a ? off stan
who probably writes his verses with crayons
you prayed while i preyed and answered your prayers
all he does now is troll the ether burned his soul
till he dont even wanna battle anymore
he get wasted more than whiteboys
when i deploy these bars like missiles he is destroyed
just an undercover ? like metroid without the cool toys
1. I never changed my name
2. No one is mad, its a blog b
3. What are you a professional IC rapper, lol. Life must suck over there huh? -
1.you did .that is why you were still stealing verses from other rapper in your battles and got dqed 3 times against me and love yal. check the credits
2.you sure sound like your mad
3.no i dont get paid for smashing you -
thedesolateone wrote: »1.you did .that is why you were still stealing verses from other rapper in your battles and got dqed 3 times against me and love yal. check the credits
2.you sure sound like your mad
3.no i dont get paid for smashing you
You one of them smart/dumb ? huh? Again, my name never changed and I randomly posted Ghostface lyrics in a ? IC battle that no one really cared out of boredom. -
You one of them smart/dumb ? huh? Again, my name never changed and I randomly posted Ghostface lyrics in a ? IC battle that no one really cared out of boredom.
like a lame would do.what american idol wasnt on?the miley cyrus show got cancelled?your girlfriend was getting pounded by your best friend?
we will see if you troll again when the battle starts.for now on the contrary, ? shut your trap. -
good thread! Loove it.. but ummm here is one of my favorite and probably best verse i wrote.. well for me it is lol.. I'll let ya'll be the judge thou.its kind of long but the last verses hit hard though...(i think)
I hail from the city of broken dreams
Where random people you see are actually fiends
And the sounds of sirens wail like ? babies
The air is ? just like the streets
And the atmosphere filled with brown clouds
People are fortunate to have lights and water
Access to amenities that I once lack
And my dreams appear to be more farther
Than the star’s, nothing to wish upon on,
Because I rather see them fall just like my falters
However, my roots lies in the heart of mother earth
Where her heart beats on the great Navajo Nation
Why is it call great, when their’s nothing great there?
Is a question I ask.
There you are greeted with brown people
Full of different features,
Perhaps one with no future
Who resides in a home full of creatures
Empty bottles from last night parties
Fill’s the beautiful mother earth’s landscapes
Now I ask, why did I ever escape?
I had to get it together
And find a dream I can claim
I’ll just be with the creator and l face the consequences
Like with the grip of the rage.
You can call me darkness
I’ll help you see the light,
I’ll increase your insight, your eyesight despite haters,
and ? money theirs work till I get paper.
This is poverty not paradise
Theirs money and drugs, ? , guns, murder, ? and thugs
Cats and dogs, pure breeds and scrubs, snakes, pigs, rats,
And more hatred than love
Their’s no difference without evil, their’s no lost without gain
Their’s no love without hate, their’s no pleasure without pain (always)
Their’s no light without darkness or sun without rain
You can’t be happy without sadness and even be proud without shame
On junior like Moses, I’m bombing on hoes
My raps are like compacts to help kids focus
To many of our peeps are hopeless on the streets homeless
Its like were hypnotize by the devils hypnosis
And we can kick note, on a better way of living
Were here to break free like were escaping from prison
Got to see a few darkness, its night vision, look towards the future
Like prophets with predictions.
Quit with your addictions, feed the children sit here and ? that with killing our women, I spit real can you feel its real with tradition.
Hope that eyes can see and engineers hear to listen
Playing the position, and I’mma musician on a mission now addition with the ambition’s to receive a recognition for lyrics with ammunition
My mind is the gutter
I laugh at competition, making haters look dope, pimps, hoes, hustlers, bustas, bums, thieves, good times, bad times, highs, lows, angels, demons, whose down with religion, truth, lies, fact and this fiction, women, children, warriors and chiefs, you don’t believe, you can’t achieve unity. This has me in disbelief.
Disabled are nowhere, these people are nowhere, my mother is on welfare with three kids in foster care.
DJ’s, MC‘s, lyricist, poets, beats, suicide disease funerals and abuse is all that I see
Their’s no difference without evil, their’s no lost without gain
Their’s no love without hate, their’s no pleasure without pain (always)
Their’s no light without darkness or sun without rain
You can’t be happy without sadness and even proud without shame -
lmao, i just re-read.. a verse.. dam, i posted more than just one verse.. my bad, I apologize..
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they say a change gon come but not today, so imma get paid, movin grams in this hallway, hallway
they say a change gon come but not tonight, so imma get right, and go on another flight, another flight
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they say a change gon come, but right now its the same
the streets still on flames, ? still gettin locked up in chains
? i tried to change, and stopped runnning these streets
but past felonies ? up my job elgibilty
filled out so many applications, who the ? gon hire me
go to a interview, aint got the job but the craka already fired me
i cant blame society,.....................
but you cant blame me if i go back and rob that ?
he could have been my boss, but now he just a lick
its hard in this world, and even harder if ya black
but i bet it'll be easier if a ? got some racks
all the bills paid a ? blowin purple saks
granny sayin this world aint cold no mo , cause she got a mink on her back
they say it get greater later, and a change gon come
but my ? still in prison and im still in the slums, damn
they say a change gon come but not today, so imma get paid, movin grams in this hallway, hallway
they say a change gon come but not tonight, so imma get right, and go on another flight, another flight
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my momma stressin college,
but i had figured i already got my knowledge
i felt like i was wasting time chasing this degree for four years
in that time i could make 400 grand standing right here
and to her the sense i was tryin make wasnt clear
on the road to riches and i got the devil to steer
2 years, and 7 jail cells later
aint ? changed but my attitude and them courtroom elevators
now im tryin to change to my old ways
but thats in the past, aint no goin back to them old days
gon come back and finish later
*not my best but i liked it -
she looked me in my eyes and told me that she love me
i looked into the sky and tried to change the subject
sooner than later we right back on the topic
"do you love me' im sorry loves just not option
im too used to boppin, thats somethin that u knew
cause i was ? yo cousin before i was ? you
love aint for me, especially when these hoes ? for free
and who am i to stop em from being freaks
i leave one hoe to jump under another ? sheets
talking bout love but you know youll ? a hunned ? besides me
cause first night i met ya we was ? then started chillin
its only been a month and you already catchin feelins
but you know you gon ? any ? wit a lot of cash
and you kno imma ? any ? with a lot of ass
yaa im not yo first and damn sho wont be yo last
you knew what this was from the start, so why you gettin mad?
youre gonna love me ooooo ooooo ooo ( you know the sample)
i like this one too......but still not my best -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adovV6fPSlM
my favorite verse is my latest verse for my new song "Lost Without You"
*Lyrics* [Verse 1: Pete Lee]
Although it's tough when growing up, I was a pretty destructive kid/
We had enough but the road got rough then i learned to take more than I give/
Is like dying just to live, a meaningless existence
So I flipped the script, trying to recommit, because i'm sick of the emptiness within/ I been
Vindicated against the system with a symptom/
Fascinated by the rhythm in which i painted my affliction/
Stained on walls that glisten crimson to escape this mental prison/
Because we're all blessed with sight but we don't always see the vision/
I have fallen and risen yet like a Spartan i'm driven by cataclysm/
Because a better living's never given and i'm still alive and kicking/
Getting over selfish feelings, quitters never win and/
Every ending is a new beginning/
And when the lights are dimming, i'll write you a fable/
Kneeling by my cradle because your healing is so graceful/
And though my heart is faithful, i'm sinning with an angel/
? I carry a lotta scars but Jesus Christ i'm thankful/ -
PoeticMurder wrote: »http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adovV6fPSlM
my favorite verse is my latest verse for my new song "Lost Without You"
*Lyrics* [Verse 1: Pete Lee]
Although it's tough when growing up, I was a pretty destructive kid/
We had enough but the road got rough then i learned to take more than I give/
Is like dying just to live, a meaningless existence
So I flipped the script, trying to recommit, because i'm sick of the emptiness within/ I been
Vindicated against the system with a symptom/
Fascinated by the rhythm in which i painted my affliction/
Stained on walls that glisten crimson to escape this mental prison/
Because we're all blessed with sight but we don't always see the vision/
I have fallen and risen yet like a Spartan i'm driven by cataclysm/
Because a better living's never given and i'm still alive and kicking/
Getting over selfish feelings, quitters never win and/
Every ending is a new beginning/
And when the lights are dimming, i'll write you a fable/
Kneeling by my cradle because your healing is so graceful/
And though my heart is faithful, i'm sinning with an angel/
? I carry a lotta scars but Jesus Christ i'm thankful/
props nice verse .you shall record this