Love Yal vs. Legend24
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16 lines
Check in by Monday
Verse due By Wendesday
3-0 k.o
5 votes win
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Check in by Monday
Verse due By Wendesday
3-0 k.o
5 votes win
50 post to vote
Explain votes
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Check in, and good luck!
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Mic check.
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Dropping soon!
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This neutron is no Legend, but take 24 hits
One line, shook'em, shorts ? , call him Legend 24
Nevermore "Warn this brotha" buts he gets killed worser than "Warner Bros Movies"
That's Legend24 gets killed neurological times 44, 1056 times he's listen to Sukiyaki
Forgive me like disrespecting, if this weak Legend24, ever made a movie
It will be hold barred action, no heart-pounding, but feels opposite when he watches ? porn
Get off ur boy friend's movies
Impute disprove let one improvice cheer up that soldier like no movie
Inadequate yo beef inarticulate, you and yo lyrics fall inalienably
Yo flow incorrectly
"How High" you get cracked on like Redman, you as a teacher is like watching a clown for free
Legend24 from Toronto, can't tell instruction, too focus on who's bacon is stankin, style Canada Bacon
Toronto, Toronto, what's to expect? Another washed up Legend who made his carreer to 24
After 24 he became a mangrove acter like correctional audience stuck on pipe poltics, manifestation
You get comfortble manicure while yo wordplay mess yo head like dandruff, you just earwig Legend
But yo stanza hit harder than yo mackline, he's type to kidnap himself like couch potato
Talking to yoself is embrassing call it militant, disciplined, and dilligent... -
It's a wrap before we start, but I'll still murder you on wax
Let's face facts, you know in your heart that you can't handle me on tracks
The stats show that you're no where in my atmosphere
Scattered tears from Love Yal make the IC believe it's rainin here
Cupid made him love y'all but my arrows will go through you
Stupid fool thinks a minor civilian can trump a Shaka Zulu
I seen you in battle, when you rhyme, you drop nonsense
His only constant is that he flows like he's been hit on the head with a blunt object
Just stop it, I know Nike told you to Just Do It...
But I think they had something else in mind for you, something that's not music
I checked your rap score, you've only succeeded once in seven attempts
A Love Yal win is as rare as seeing Adam Morrison off the bench
As a homage to John 15, I'll leave you at peace in pieces
"How to strategically supress a subject" is my graduate level thesis
I defy gravity when I rise above Yal and smite him
Strike him so that he always remembers the day he faced a Titan. -
Nothing seriously, but good luck!
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good battle i will vote tommorrow when i can analyze more
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I see you Legend!
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Thanks, good match, uppin for votes please!
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Can't even get a vote up in here? Y'all are serious..
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its almost a week, come on voters.
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love yal had alot of good potential lines but i think it just gets lost in translation
love yal has some good and funny words and idea but just not structured or well-spoken
love yal did do 16 lines this time and i do see major improvement from love yal
legent verse was well structured and an easy read funny at parts and lyrical
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Nice to see you didn't jet 24. You should sign up for the summer tournament once that goes up in a few weeks.
I like the raining here line off 24's verse. Also liked the Just Do It/music lines. That was funny. Last line was cool too. As for love yal, the beginning was kind of jumpy. I liked the 2nd half of your verse better. I felt Legend24 had the stronger verse BC some of love yal's line fell short of any real punches. For example, the Redman/How High line could've been something special but the ending, "watching a clown for free" didn't do it for me. I respect your grind though. Vote - Legend24. -
I'm working to type better, but still a good match, uppin for votes!
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I am going to call it and give it to Legend24. If by chance you want me to leave this open another week BC you are hoping more votes will actually come in, send me a PM and I'll open the thread.
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