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Martyr for the world to see
the harsh reality of a flawed system
deep within the system pours open pure white
pick scabs resembling black
ITS AN ATTACK open your eyes
the blood lies on the hands of those in demand
living in the higher ups thinking they can judge
and put souls through the higher ups....
or downs as these mortals frown and drown
in tears of laughter and anger
meanwhile peace and prosperity is far from the eye
no lie I packing my bags and wanna fly
can't deny a whole country full of ? , greed, and corruption
the assumption that a man murdered without a bit of nothing
to account for the fact that maybe just maybe YALL OVERREACTED
just a tad bit and its a sad bit of affairs
taking views and stares
scoffs and jeers
give him years and the chair
doped him up because its the “? ” way
send him to hell because that's where the “darkies” stay
and lay to face the ultimate judgment
the audacity to have this man convicted and ridicule
because you didn't have the facts and went by stereotypical
got the nation reminiscing over you
but yet what is the nation going to do?
Archive it and accept the system?
Put it in the back of minds and not seek wisdom?
That maybe just maybe we as a whole need better
revolution...or whatever
something to battle this dead horse that bleeds lies and hypocrisy
instead of justice and liberty
but who I'm to speak of these things
just a human being want to see peace and unity
no murdering, robbery of our culture, destiny and creed
forgiveness through time and not murdering of humanity
? creates wrath to take care of the guilty
WHO YOU TO BE ? ....
yet you pull the switch and let the blood reign free
another dead and gone...for liberty and justice for all
the harsh reality of a flawed system
deep within the system pours open pure white
pick scabs resembling black
ITS AN ATTACK open your eyes
the blood lies on the hands of those in demand
living in the higher ups thinking they can judge
and put souls through the higher ups....
or downs as these mortals frown and drown
in tears of laughter and anger
meanwhile peace and prosperity is far from the eye
no lie I packing my bags and wanna fly
can't deny a whole country full of ? , greed, and corruption
the assumption that a man murdered without a bit of nothing
to account for the fact that maybe just maybe YALL OVERREACTED
just a tad bit and its a sad bit of affairs
taking views and stares
scoffs and jeers
give him years and the chair
doped him up because its the “? ” way
send him to hell because that's where the “darkies” stay
and lay to face the ultimate judgment
the audacity to have this man convicted and ridicule
because you didn't have the facts and went by stereotypical
got the nation reminiscing over you
but yet what is the nation going to do?
Archive it and accept the system?
Put it in the back of minds and not seek wisdom?
That maybe just maybe we as a whole need better
revolution...or whatever
something to battle this dead horse that bleeds lies and hypocrisy
instead of justice and liberty
but who I'm to speak of these things
just a human being want to see peace and unity
no murdering, robbery of our culture, destiny and creed
forgiveness through time and not murdering of humanity
? creates wrath to take care of the guilty
WHO YOU TO BE ? ....
yet you pull the switch and let the blood reign free
another dead and gone...for liberty and justice for all
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REAL_POETICAL wrote: »Martyr for the world to see
the harsh reality of a flawed system
deep within the system pours open pure white
pick scabs resembling black
ITS AN ATTACK open your eyes
the blood lies on the hands of those in demand
living in the higher ups thinking they can judge
and put souls through the higher ups....
or downs as these mortals frown and drown
in tears of laughter and anger
meanwhile peace and prosperity is far from the eye
no lie I packing my bags and wanna fly
can't deny a whole country full of ? , greed, and corruption
the assumption that a man murdered without a bit of nothing
to account for the fact that maybe just maybe YALL OVERREACTED
just a tad bit and its a sad bit of affairs
taking views and stares
scoffs and jeers
give him years and the chair
doped him up because its the “? ” way
send him to hell because that's where the “darkies” stay
and lay to face the ultimate judgment
the audacity to have this man convicted and ridicule
because you didn't have the facts and went by stereotypical
got the nation reminiscing over you
but yet what is the nation going to do?
Archive it and accept the system?
Put it in the back of minds and not seek wisdom?
That maybe just maybe we as a whole need better
revolution...or whatever
something to battle this dead horse that bleeds lies and hypocrisy
instead of justice and liberty
but who I'm to speak of these things
just a human being want to see peace and unity
no murdering, robbery of our culture, destiny and creed
forgiveness through time and not murdering of humanity
? creates wrath to take care of the guilty
WHO YOU TO BE ? ....
yet you pull the switch and let the blood reign free
another dead and gone...for liberty and justice for all
yo you mirror what I wanna write like on the real homie....the words you use, perfect
great read my fellow poet
keep inspiring the uninspired
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Damn, this was a great piece, sounds inspired by some serious injustice which causes a lot of grief and anger and I can feel your pain towards this issue as I read…
Great piece :tu I really like 'where the 'darkies' stay, rhymed really well and was definitely that dumbed out comment that fit the purpose of what you were trying to get across really well :tu -
Dam Real P, this topic has been SO sensitive for me, but you summed it all up..
I on't think it's really no justice here in America, let alone the world. It's not better ruler than Jah..
great read, keep expressing poetically on topics like this, fa real..
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Thanks for the props yall...I really needed to get that off of my chest...I was indifferent on capital punishment for a while until I look deeply into this case...and others where folks that are innocent to the core have to suffer the abuse of man laws and not ? 's judgement...it really ? me off when time of regret, remorse, and redemption for a being can't be taking to consideration but death is the final solution...regardless of innocence, circumstance, pity, or even the simple thought that a higher power can judge such things...enough of my 2 cents lol...thanks for checking for this piece yall...I love this place for not only the poets/poetess that express themselves with pure honesty but simple fact that HONESTY is the key in the poetry that pours out of the WTE
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No doubt real p, it's the spot where we voice our thoughts, feelings, on any stance for that matter too!
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Good ? real P that was deep
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thanks for the props....appreciate it *bows*