For a Hip-Hop head does my bars suck?
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msmusick
Members Posts: 57 ✭
"My raps are never diabolical
But certainly phenominal'a
mess around and have ya brain comin' out ya follicles
Knowledge is astronomical
Better cop ma module
Genre war movie historical not a comical."
I'm not a rapper, just my way of introducing myself to the IC
But certainly phenominal'a
mess around and have ya brain comin' out ya follicles
Knowledge is astronomical
Better cop ma module
Genre war movie historical not a comical."
I'm not a rapper, just my way of introducing myself to the IC
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Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
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YoungGoldie wrote: »Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
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um.....riiiiiiiggggggghhhhhhhtttttttt
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Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.
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Thanks for posting. But again it was just for fun.
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Lol I should've figured eventually I'd be asked for validation. I'm technologically incompetent so here's my facebook link
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yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway
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Throwed Off Axel wrote: »yea feel free to post anytime we need more females on here anyway
Thanks for the welcome. I've been checkin' out this sight for a minute so I figured what the heck. Might as well join. -
YoungGoldie wrote: »Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
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SnowBunnySmanger wrote: »YoungGoldie wrote: »Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.
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SnowBunnySmanger wrote: »YoungGoldie wrote: »Welcome, but ur sayin a bunch of nothin. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
Thanks. But it REALLY wasn't a serious rhyme.
Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox -
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Dat link didnt work for me , send some pics to my inbox[/quote]
I'm not sure how that's why I was hoping that the link would work
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Not bad at all
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. Find somethin to talk about , then make it clever.
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Here's something
“Where did it all go wrong”
Its tough when you’re on top, then you start your drop
Imperfections, ? spots, big cracks in the rock, find out
You’re no longer the man on the block
Cold slap in the face, don’t look so shocked
We had it all, we had it cod locked
Look at us now, what the hell’s going on
Somebody please tell me where the ? ’d we go wrong
Behaviors contagious, no matter how outrageous
Like hating with rage, making slaves for your trade
Putting weed smokers in cages, ? rich getting ageless
Aint there anyone out there to gauge this
Aint there anyone there that can step up to the plate
And save us
? I can’t tell you how bad that I hate this
Someone please tell me what the ? ’s going on
Someone please tell me where the ? ’d we go wrong
Chorus
Don’t make any sense
We had it good for so long
Somebody please tell me what’s going on
Faith in a Nation that once was strong
Somebody please tell me where it all went wrong
Just a few years back, seemed we were on track
Eastern Europe had began to ? , then just like that
The Berlin wall came crashing down
Commies seemed to be coming around
Peace it seemed was the new kid in town
Well we can’t have that, a small scale attack
Then just like that, we’re back on track
? that peace, we’ll find a new home in the Middle East
New place for fun for the ? guns and the bombs
Find a new place for our troops to call home
Where homesick boys can write home to their Moms
Won’t matter to much if they lose their legs and their arms
Plenty more where they come from back home on the farm
Can anyone please tell me what’s going on
Somebody please, where the ? ’d we go wrong
Greed has its needs and it feeds and it feeds
Fulfills its hunger off of you and off me
Give me ? amnesty from this ?
Beast or I swear by ? you’ll see someone bleed
We’ve had it, who planted this ? seed
Somebody tell me what the hell’s going on
Somebody tell me where the ? we went wrong
Chorus
Seems this ? just gets worse and worse and worse
Drive this whole administration to work in a hearse
They grab your ? and they ? and they ?
Circle of ? jerks gone berserk
Sit behind their desks and they lurk and they lurk
Want your ? pants your shoes and your shirt
Want you to lose what they know you deserve
Want you to choose what you know they don’t deserve
Would someone tell me what the hell’s going on
Can somebody tell me where the ? we went wrong
You don’t pass goal, you ? go to jail
Unless your part of this big business cartel
Can’t borrow from a friend cause he’s just like you
Government won’t take a ? IOU
It’ Hooray for me and ? you too
? should have went to business school
Today’s for me and tomorrow is too
Guess I’ll just wish you the best of luck fool
Lucks all you get and you’ll need it too
Cause it’s my job to ? you and ? you, ? you
? you and ? you, ? you and ? you
? you
RapRite 2012
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no, its dope
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Yes.
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I like homies written a couple posts down! http://youtu.be/3z9ZKiq8m_E
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This was a good start for you. Like you said, you are a Hip-Hop head and this was for fun. Seems like you are just trying to see how you can manage your own wordplay. Like others have suggested, create a concept and then just work around that. Peace.
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I think simplicity and meaning along with flow and delivery make a good spitter
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The whole super lyricist thing is played out man.
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pretty good for a non-rapper