Love Yal vs. Legend24

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love yal
love yal Members Posts: 1,327
edited July 2011 in Lyrical Executions
16 lines
Check in by Monday
Verse due By Wendesday
3-0 k.o
5 votes win
50 post to vote
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Check in, and good luck!
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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    Mic check.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Dropping soon!
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    This neutron is no Legend, but take 24 hits
    One line, shook'em, shorts ? , call him Legend 24

    Nevermore "Warn this brotha" buts he gets killed worser than "Warner Bros Movies"
    That's Legend24 gets killed neurological times 44, 1056 times he's listen to Sukiyaki

    Forgive me like disrespecting, if this weak Legend24, ever made a movie
    It will be hold barred action, no heart-pounding, but feels opposite when he watches ? porn
    Get off ur boy friend's movies

    Impute disprove let one improvice cheer up that soldier like no movie
    Inadequate yo beef inarticulate, you and yo lyrics fall inalienably
    Yo flow incorrectly

    "How High" you get cracked on like Redman, you as a teacher is like watching a clown for free
    Legend24 from Toronto, can't tell instruction, too focus on who's bacon is stankin, style Canada Bacon

    Toronto, Toronto, what's to expect? Another washed up Legend who made his carreer to 24
    After 24 he became a mangrove acter like correctional audience stuck on pipe poltics, manifestation

    You get comfortble manicure while yo wordplay mess yo head like dandruff, you just earwig Legend
    But yo stanza hit harder than yo mackline, he's type to kidnap himself like couch potato
    Talking to yoself is embrassing call it militant, disciplined, and dilligent...
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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    It's a wrap before we start, but I'll still murder you on wax
    Let's face facts, you know in your heart that you can't handle me on tracks
    The stats show that you're no where in my atmosphere
    Scattered tears from Love Yal make the IC believe it's rainin here
    Cupid made him love y'all but my arrows will go through you
    Stupid fool thinks a minor civilian can trump a Shaka Zulu
    I seen you in battle, when you rhyme, you drop nonsense
    His only constant is that he flows like he's been hit on the head with a blunt object
    Just stop it, I know Nike told you to Just Do It...
    But I think they had something else in mind for you, something that's not music
    I checked your rap score, you've only succeeded once in seven attempts
    A Love Yal win is as rare as seeing Adam Morrison off the bench
    As a homage to John 15, I'll leave you at peace in pieces
    "How to strategically supress a subject" is my graduate level thesis
    I defy gravity when I rise above Yal and smite him
    Strike him so that he always remembers the day he faced a Titan.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Nothing seriously, but good luck!
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
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    good battle i will vote tommorrow when i can analyze more
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  • Tupacfan
    Tupacfan Members, Moderators Posts: 2,428 Regulator
    edited April 2011
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    I see you Legend!

    I'll be voting shortly.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    Thanks, good match, uppin for votes please!
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  • Legend24
    Legend24 Members Posts: 689 ✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    Can't even get a vote up in here? Y'all are serious..
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited April 2011
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    its almost a week, come on voters.
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  • thedesolateone
    thedesolateone Members Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2011
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    love yal had alot of good potential lines but i think it just gets lost in translation
    love yal has some good and funny words and idea but just not structured or well-spoken
    love yal did do 16 lines this time and i do see major improvement from love yal
    legent verse was well structured and an easy read funny at parts and lyrical
    my vote is for legend 24
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited April 2011
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    Nice to see you didn't jet 24. You should sign up for the summer tournament once that goes up in a few weeks.

    I like the raining here line off 24's verse. Also liked the Just Do It/music lines. That was funny. Last line was cool too. As for love yal, the beginning was kind of jumpy. I liked the 2nd half of your verse better. I felt Legend24 had the stronger verse BC some of love yal's line fell short of any real punches. For example, the Redman/How High line could've been something special but the ending, "watching a clown for free" didn't do it for me. I respect your grind though. Vote - Legend24.
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  • love yal
    love yal Members Posts: 1,327
    edited May 2011
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    I'm working to type better, but still a good match, uppin for votes!
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  • raw-material_ahh
    raw-material_ahh Members Posts: 555 ✭
    edited July 2011
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    I am going to call it and give it to Legend24. If by chance you want me to leave this open another week BC you are hoping more votes will actually come in, send me a PM and I'll open the thread.
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